Fate Gamer Night - Chapter 56
Added 2020-05-13 20:44:15 +0000 UTCSorry it took so long. This chapter was already finished several days ago but I promised myself I would go back to it and revisit a few points but life keeps getting in the way.
If I still waited It would be another week or so.
So here's chapter 56 that finalizes the scene between Ryouko and Shirou, while also laying down the setting for the next arc. Smut will be lacking going forward for a few chapters in favor of action and some actual plot. I hope you aren't too disappointed.
The Fall is also complete and it's coming up soon.
Comments
I'm putting them up now.
IchaIchaSennin
2020-05-16 06:54:40 +0000 UTCHappy people enjoy this chapter but I’m more excited for the next chapter of The Fall personally. Glad to see your still doing well despite the current craziness going on. Keep up the good work and I eagerly wait for the next part of Rin and Sabers adventure
IgnisHeart
2020-05-16 06:40:25 +0000 UTCThe absolute domination of Shirou is BAD END material only. He's willing to play submissive up to a point. That point being being denied his own release. Ryouko can play him all she wants but if she tries to control him it won't end up well.
IchaIchaSennin
2020-05-16 06:29:47 +0000 UTCOn the one hand, I rather liked last chapter's experimentation with Shirou being the submissive rather than the dominant, and I can't help but read his reaction at the end of the sex scene as an apology to the fans who *weren't* into it (many of whom complained, I acknowledge) and a promise not to do it anymore. But then again, it clearly had a big impact on him too, so perhaps I'm reading too much into it. And Taiga and Saeko seem to want to figure out what it was and try it out too. Not sure how to read that bit at the end where Shirou didn't seem too into her emotionally... but I guess there's still time to see if that relationship will continue to grow into something healthier than it is. And I look forward to the progression of the Yoruichi arc! It's much-anticipated on my end, and I wonder who and what else will be making an appearance. I remember the omen it ends with a crazed Yoruichi trying to kill our protagonist; let's see how *that* shakes out.
SpectralTime
2020-05-13 23:14:58 +0000 UTCPersonaly, I prefer my smut with some plot, so it's fine. Now the question is, how much harder is shiro going to push himself, since I dont see this scenario being any easier than the last ones. Also, I have to wonder what will happen once the grail and all it's own factors come into play. Because things have vastly changed from the norm at this point
Kevin Ramos
2020-05-13 21:29:44 +0000 UTC
