For this storyline, i realise. I put too much story on it. I mean, half of it (the begining) take 3 out of 8 pages. Thats why i cancel it. I think i suppose to make “just jump in” / straight to the plot stoyline.
EDIT[Nov16.2020] : this post become doujin sketch collection for “Helpful Maid”
EDIT[Des02.2020] : adding the storyboard sketch