RR Lori Warren - Chapter 64
Added 2025-08-22 21:00:11 +0000 UTCHere is Chapter 64 of Lori's Story!
Reduction & Relocation: Lori Warren
Chapter 64 - A Tale of Two Experiments
Comments
It's not always easy to tell a creator that you didn't like what they put out, so I'm very grateful that you had the courage to do so! I value your vote and I'm listening closely to hear what other readers think of this concept. I'm not sure I'd call the things Miriam does to her subject anything if not disturbing, though :P
Bridget_drkW
2025-08-25 12:03:05 +0000 UTCChapter 64 was actually around 5.5k words, which is around 20-30% longer than my normal chapters. I would have LOVED for you to see Michael's reaction too; unfortunately bringing michael out to meet Evelyn and christopher would have blown up Lori's deception strategy pretty quickly! michael may not meet them but that doesn't mean you won't see more of them in the future! :)
Bridget_drkW
2025-08-25 11:59:11 +0000 UTCKnow you tried something here, you're a talented writer, don't gete wrong. But this one concept I find very disturbing,y vote is a no. Just for the feedback. Bring us back Miriam instead! π
Agood
2025-08-25 09:01:57 +0000 UTCI'm a little disappointed that the chapter story it is short and only about Evelyn. I was hoping to see Michelle's reaction, hopefully soon.
Ragaey
2025-08-25 02:43:28 +0000 UTC<3 <3 <3
Bridget_drkW
2025-08-24 23:29:23 +0000 UTCYusssssss
Max Herzl-Betz
2025-08-23 05:02:33 +0000 UTC
