Ch: 121.3
Added 2025-02-07 06:25:00 +0000 UTCComments
Aaliyah asked as she struggled to remain conciseness -> Consciousness Amazing chapter as always!
Eliel Taskinen
2025-11-24 19:07:10 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!!
Undead Writer
2025-02-28 03:27:49 +0000 UTCDang, can't believe I missed so many. I noticed it being wrong a couple times but only stopped to check for two lol I hope its not like AI editing messing up the name or something
karmaslap
2025-02-23 23:49:41 +0000 UTCThere's Aalyiah, Aaliayh, Aaloyah, that's all the different ones I caught.
James Everhart
2025-02-23 16:02:32 +0000 UTCI just reread and her name is slightly misspell close to 13 times
James Everhart
2025-02-23 15:52:19 +0000 UTCNeeds editing, both for flow and because you misspelled Aaliyah twice. Nice to have the story resume again
karmaslap
2025-02-21 22:24:53 +0000 UTCNot so much lengthen the fight as give their opponent a target fixation. In the case of the winged serpent it would absolutely murder aaliyah in a dozen seconds if it was leaving itself open and uncaring of tabithas attacks. Sure, it would get hurt but soul attacks engender a level of fear that makes living creatures not care about consequences.
Valderan
2025-02-16 10:33:52 +0000 UTCIt is mentioned in the chapter after the fight with the superior undead that if that skill is used with someone higher level than Aaliyah it can lengthen the fight too long
Sebastian Romero Zapata
2025-02-14 05:59:25 +0000 UTCYou’re probably right, I completely forgot that she hasn’t use Soul Devourer on a living target. Although, lore wise exp should cost the surface of the soul, and she in theory could skim some off, but yeah, I gotten it mixed up. I coulda swore she did use it on some low level mob in the past, but thinking back on it now it’s likely she used it after the mob died. Although, I’m pretty sure it’s the soul being devoured that can’t be reborn, not her, but then again I could be misremembering. It’s been a while since the story’s resumed, forgot a lotta stuff. Kosnik does foreshadow a trump card of Aaliyah and Tabitha, and since Tabitha shouldn’t have any trump cards since she doesn’t have a sword t5 skill and no other demonstrated resource, Aaliyah is the only one left that can assuredly deal with stage two lesser dragon. They have one mana pot left, and for me it’s pretty much coded for her to use it in a desperate situation. That’s probably why I mixed it up, tbh.
Hetian Yu
2025-02-13 08:20:34 +0000 UTCShe never tried to directly absorb outer soul from something living, probably because if she fucks up and by accident absorbs core soul she becomes monster and basically dies as a person.
Skyra
2025-02-13 07:29:19 +0000 UTCI think that trying to absorb a soul directly will lead to what the gods warned her about - her soul will be "mutilated" (as I assume, along with skills, it bites off both memory and something like the essence of the creature) and she will not be able to be reborn Plus it can be like with a skeleton - the snake will immediately attack her ... But if we assume that the gods can really lie, then perhaps the gods are interested in a person with such a skill not becoming too strong. If a person can digest memories so that they do not affect the soul, then this will in fact be a full absorption of all experience - and this is millions or even tens of millions
Fortuner
2025-02-13 05:43:14 +0000 UTCI’m sure this was asked before, but why isn’t Aaliyah using Soul Devourer? Is it because the dragon would immediately sense it, and place much more importance on her? Or would Soul Devourer not do enough damage on physical enemies (see the undead in the tomb) in a short amount of time with its low level? I feel doing a sneak attack on the dragon earlier with Soul Devourer would’ve been good, it’ll shave off a couple of crucial levels that could make or break their survival, but from I’m reading into here is that she’s saving it up for the last moment? Personally, with the dragon already being so damaged they really just need one more good hit to be fatal, so Soul Devourer’s potential as a sneak attack is wasted, but it’s not the worst battle decision.
Hetian Yu
2025-02-13 02:23:12 +0000 UTCThis chapter was really good. As other mentioined it was a little strange but definitely good. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Fortuner
2025-02-11 16:18:49 +0000 UTCIt refers to the fact that high level battles only last 10 minutes and explains it at the beginning of the chapter
Sebastian Romero Zapata
2025-02-11 06:13:55 +0000 UTCHmm, always have 'let's get ready to rumble' in my head at moments Like this. Thank you for the great read.
Straven
2025-02-08 21:01:13 +0000 UTCI'm guessing it's related to how long their ( dragon and the girls) mana and stamina last since they are pulling all there skills plus stacking the skills or overclocking them
James Everhart
2025-02-08 00:30:15 +0000 UTCLove the chapter. The "time remaining" at the end feels a little out of place without similar earlier on.
David Murphy
2025-02-07 21:33:48 +0000 UTCWas rereading some earlier chaps, mentioning the dragon heart being a very valuable resource. Would be cool if the lesser dragon heart has a similar or different effect if split between the 2. Would add to the scene of Tabitha and Aliayah returning home that much cooler with the feathers of the dragon, another smaller level bump and the effect of eating the dragon heart
Annora D.
2025-02-07 20:24:02 +0000 UTCI'm already hearing Aaliyah sassing Pacore by pointing out that she gained 15 levels (I'm guessing there) under Tabitha so maybe she doesn't need him...and also, can he do better ? X)
Iphigelina
2025-02-07 19:38:58 +0000 UTCPacore is gonna get his ear chewed by Alyiah mom when they find out she fought a dragon lol 😆
Scott Fellman
2025-02-07 18:37:46 +0000 UTCGood chapter
Ken
2025-02-07 17:59:03 +0000 UTCAwesome fight so far!
heh
2025-02-07 17:19:31 +0000 UTCLovely chapter. I agree with you, it would have been too short to end the fighting here ^^. Also, there's still one healing potion left so I'm waiting for the serpent to do some damages. The style at the beginning of the chapter was surprising but it wasn't upsetting. Maybe not too often but sparingly it can be a nice contrast. I hope you have fun writing the end of the fight ^^. Also I can't wait to see Pacore back with the girls xD
Iphigelina
2025-02-07 13:08:05 +0000 UTCNice chapter, but even if dragon win and grows it has a while before it can challenge the kraken , because it was comparable to a real dragon according to danger sense that Tabitha has. Plus it lives in super mana
James Everhart
2025-02-07 10:44:02 +0000 UTCHammer Down!
White Neko Knight
2025-02-07 10:22:08 +0000 UTCI look forward for them to chomp on the lesser dragon
Luboš Hemala
2025-02-07 09:53:46 +0000 UTCMaybe to some degree. But it was either so focused on Tabitha that it just wasn't paying attention to her, or it just didn't see her as a big enough threat. Maybe both. There's also a possibility that being in the mana zone alerts it to your presence and general location, but not a pinpoint location.
Emblyon
2025-02-07 08:26:56 +0000 UTCReally? I kinda like it. But I do think that it depends on the scene and circumstances at the time.
Emblyon
2025-02-07 08:23:21 +0000 UTCA good chapter. Some of the writing seemed a little off and might benefit from lines separating the points of view but honestly it’s probably best to post and move on as I could see that this chapter would far to easily trap you in an endless cycle of revision and changes. Better to just write the fight out and revisit later than not get through it. I definitely enjoyed the ending timer showing that the battle won’t last for much longer and maybe that could be implemented more to show the dragging out of time. I think the elements and what happened in the chapter were superb though and wouldn’t change any of that. Besides all that in truth you are the author and have put in the work so I can only say go with your own gut feelings as you are the one in the end that is the writer and the one who made all of this. Cheers!
Grant Daniel
2025-02-07 08:14:47 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Richard Öhler
2025-02-07 08:13:34 +0000 UTCSurely the serpent would have been able to sense Aalaiayh with its mana zone?
Stubbsee
2025-02-07 08:00:35 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter. Glad you are writing again.
Justin
2025-02-07 07:45:20 +0000 UTCSo happy this is back, thank you!
Michael Olson
2025-02-07 07:43:30 +0000 UTC---- battle-hardened maiden ---- Feels off. Maybe "Hardened Battle Maiden" ---- each used movement skills wantonly. ---- Probably not the best word choice (wantonly). "constantly", "ceaselessly", or perhaps "liberally" would be better choices. ---- "Did I get it?" Aaliyah asked as she struggled to remain conciseness. ---- Probably should be "conscious" there. ---- But it was in all that mayhem that Aalyiah noticed it. ---- Typo: Aaliyah. A good way to stop this trivial error is to add the word to the dictionary of your word processor :) Thanks for the chapter.
PickledTink
2025-02-07 07:15:21 +0000 UTCThe chapters looked really weird when written in third person. The old style looked much better.
Shylt eduardo
2025-02-07 06:53:18 +0000 UTCAmazing chapter, doesn't A have a multi strike skill? Did she use it on the sneak power strike?
Charles Hughes
2025-02-07 06:41:52 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter
Owen Wilson
2025-02-07 06:37:44 +0000 UTCTftc
Christian Roberts
2025-02-07 06:35:01 +0000 UTC
