Ch: 121.2
Added 2025-02-04 01:12:57 +0000 UTCComments
Was this chapter altered?
Jay Montijo
2026-03-04 17:15:38 +0000 UTCWouldn't that have been nice
Lucas beck
2026-03-04 17:09:19 +0000 UTC? Was this just edited or re posted? I thought I was getting a sudden surprise chapter 😂
Emblyon
2026-03-04 17:08:12 +0000 UTCThe fight gets even better!!
Eliel Taskinen
2025-11-24 18:53:16 +0000 UTCAwesome fight! I like where this is going. I didn't expect the fire breath, cool idea. That said, I'm not 100% sold on the perspective change. It's a little jarring to go from 1st person to 3rd Omnicient mid-story. That's usually something most authors avoid. That said, it IS cool to see things from Tabitha, Aaliyah, and the Wind Serpent's perspectives at the same time, so I see why you've done it.
Spectacular
2025-03-05 23:01:09 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Undead Writer
2025-02-28 03:20:42 +0000 UTCMaybe more details to show progress the finer the detail the higher the skill level or rebrand, but I wouldn't pick rebrand unless you want to lose what reputation you gain with your past logo
James Everhart
2025-02-19 04:50:54 +0000 UTCOMG This was amazing congrats in the story development
Edgar Ghz
2025-02-15 05:10:25 +0000 UTCCongrats on getting back to writing! I'd missed your story! I know it can be hard when stuff develops an "Uck field"
David Murphy
2025-02-06 12:25:57 +0000 UTCAaaaaaaaaaah
Sebastian Romero Zapata
2025-02-05 02:07:44 +0000 UTCLove it gald they are doing good but being steady is better.
James Everhart
2025-02-04 21:27:34 +0000 UTCThanks this was perfect. I lo e the battle tactics change and the evolution of the breath attack. Let's hope they unlock a skill called dragon slayer!!!
Scott Fellman
2025-02-04 19:29:23 +0000 UTCGreat fighting sequence! It was the same attack that had destroyed her last shied and arm ==> It was the same attack that had destroyed her last shield and arm
M. Lampi
2025-02-04 18:51:51 +0000 UTCI think write as you wish for the length. Don’t worry about brevity or lengthening. Just write as and what you need. Give it as much or as little gravitas as you think it needs for it to mesh with the other story beats and threads that are around it. This fight is what you wish to make of it be it a grand culmination or a side boss on a side quest. We trust you and believe in you.
Grant Daniel
2025-02-04 08:37:35 +0000 UTCtyftc
pix
2025-02-04 07:04:15 +0000 UTCBlacksmithing (LV76) finally!!! Does this mean her logo/brand is changing again?
Richard Öhler
2025-02-04 05:26:13 +0000 UTCPersonally, no matter the hype, I'm not one for long, drawn out fight scenes. As long as you depict what needs to be depicted, it's fine. You don't need to come up with 10,000 different scenarios to pad the word count of the fight, lol. So far it's been as epic as I'd hoped it would be.
Kyfe
2025-02-04 01:43:05 +0000 UTC---- It was the same attack that had destroyed her last shied ---- Typo: Should be shield. ---- her feet leaving deep groves in the dry forest floor ---- Typo: Should be grooves. ---- Aalyiah and the serpent both froze, one in disbelief and the other in excitement when they both saw Tabitha still standing after taking such a hit. ---- Two things: 1: Typo: Should be Aaliyah. 2: You should probably swap the order disbelief and excitement. The expressions follow better if they are done in the same order as the entities listed. Reading it the first time I parsed it as Aaliyah expressing disbelief, and the serpent being excited. Good chapter. Thank you for posting.
PickledTink
2025-02-04 01:33:50 +0000 UTCGood chapter
Charles Hughes
2025-02-04 01:25:07 +0000 UTCThis is what I have been missing!!
Kazukuza
2025-02-04 01:23:32 +0000 UTCGetting a chapter update for a really good story while I’m reading a different, also really good story feels like my parents getting a divorce
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2025-02-04 01:14:29 +0000 UTC
