emergency
Added 2024-05-07 01:39:45 +0000 UTCTotal distrust in my own sight
Retire from knowing anything, I just might
Head on collision, fatal fated night
Fall from grace by shattered headlight
Certainly I must be certain concerning this uncertainty
Slow motion symphony
So breathtaking, so deadly
Crisis actors, my darling if only
Donβt attempt a glimpse
I promise you wonβt like what you see
Fractured body and fractured mind alike
Bleeding out, all vital signs on strike
Breathlessly awaiting the adrenaline spike
Divine devastation, almost godlike
Realistically I realize the reality
My choice was made when I picked up the ignition key
No lights or sirens coming, itβs just you and me
There is an emergency
Inside me
Where my heart used to be
Comments
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Jasmine
2024-05-16 20:46:40 +0000 UTCπππ
Shane Foster
2024-05-15 23:45:00 +0000 UTCthank you. great notes <3
Jasmine
2024-05-14 05:13:46 +0000 UTCThe repetition and alliteration brings beautiful meaning, especially with how it connects to the poem's overall message
Ryan Kurburski
2024-05-14 05:02:57 +0000 UTC<3
Jasmine
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Skylor Beck
2024-05-07 01:42:52 +0000 UTC
