The Fluffer - Page 9
Added 2019-01-02 04:47:10 +0000 UTCWe're getting so close to the good stuff I can almost taste it. Just a few more pages to get through.
I'm a little annoyed because I thought of a decent way I could have approached this story that would have gotten us to the nasty bits in like two pages, but oh well. Here are are now so I just gotta keep pushing forward. x3
I had to be careful with how I approached this page to avoid making it feel too mean or dark. That's not the feeling I'm aiming for here, so as a result she comes across a bit more 'drunk' than 'drugged', but honestly I'm okay with that. Doesn't seem as mean somehow!
The drawing portion of this page has some problems, but I think the colouring turned out fairly nice, at least. I dunno, either way I hope ya like it!
Comments
Well, I'm glad people seem to be okay with the buildup so far. It's a little longer and more involved than I'd personally like it to be just as a matter of personal taste, but as long as I haven't bored everyone to tears just yet then hey, mission accomplished. x3 Thanks!
Ruaidri
2019-01-03 05:30:50 +0000 UTCRegarding the last two panels, I think you made them work out great in here with the colors :) The stripes help define the direction of the thigh, something that felt ambiguous in the sketch and lineart. Great job! As for the buildup, don't be so hard on yourself. I think you've done a great job of displaying everyone's personalities, motivations and goals, and when we get to the inevitable 'fox on the business end of a horse' bit, it'll be a lot more than "just" that because of it! Thought I must admit... I am excited to see it happen :P
Bloudin Ruo
2019-01-02 06:33:58 +0000 UTCI guess I'm just not super confident in my buildup. I've never been a writer and don't really have the skills, and I worry the setup scenario I've got here might be a bit on the boring side. If it makes people like the filth even more when we get to it, awesome, I just hope I haven't bored people away from even paying attention by the time that happens! x3
Ruaidri
2019-01-02 05:08:34 +0000 UTCFor what it's worth, I don't think a good bit of buildup is a bad thing in a smut comic. Building a backstory, motivations and character make the action a lot hotter when you get to it; if that weren't the case there wouldn't be any comics, just standalone pics. Or at least, if there were any they wouldn't be nearly as popular as they are. Don't feel like the setup is something you need to rush past -- it's the foundation for the big payoff, make it solid!
minoan
2019-01-02 04:58:32 +0000 UTC
