Conjunction
Added 2020-04-19 23:22:15 +0000 UTCHere's the first 2000 words of a new story: https://pastebin.com/NLSRqXks
When an ecological disaster threatens to plunge Caden's kingdom into a famine the likes of which has never been seen, he must journey to a ruined city in search of an ancient artifact that is rumored to be capable of commanding the heavens themselves. Unbeknownst to him, the city is protected by a fierce tribe of reptilian warriors who view it as sacred, and who will kill to protect its sanctity.
Comments
I think the best part about reading your stories is that even with these one off books you always manage to make such a deep and interesting world, that feels so lived in, and not just hastily thrown together.
Indexo's Vault
2020-07-03 14:22:07 +0000 UTCFinished! The story is edited and chaptered, and I will be making the Ebook tomorrow.
Snekguy
2020-06-27 20:50:34 +0000 UTCAnother 15,000 words edited, from Chapter 10 to “This handle is false,” Only 10k left to go.
Snekguy
2020-06-26 23:32:37 +0000 UTCAnother 10,000 words edited in spite of electrical storms knocking out my power for most of the day. From 'There was another wet pop' to Chapter 10.
Snekguy
2020-06-25 23:50:26 +0000 UTCStay hydrated
Giggles fun time
2020-06-25 03:02:15 +0000 UTC10,000 words edited, from Chapter 9, to 'There was another wet pop'. My output may be scaled back a little for a day or two, this heatwave is cooking my brain.
Snekguy
2020-06-24 22:26:32 +0000 UTCAnother 20,000 words edited, from Chapter 7 to Chapter 9.
Snekguy
2020-06-23 23:37:31 +0000 UTC15,000 words edited, from 'She was alerted by the sound of rustling leaves,' to Chapter 7
Snekguy
2020-06-22 23:16:52 +0000 UTCAnother 20,000 words edited, from Chapter 3 to 'She was alerted by the sound of rustling leaves,'
Snekguy
2020-06-21 23:40:05 +0000 UTCThe first 20,000 words are edited, from Chapter 1 to Chapter 3.
Snekguy
2020-06-20 20:54:11 +0000 UTC4000 word update, I added in a new fight scene to spice up the sequence beneath the observatory. New content from 'A series of glowing symbols appeared in the marble' to “This handle is false,” Actual editing will begin tomorrow, and should take about 6 days.
Snekguy
2020-06-19 21:16:57 +0000 UTCWill there be art on kadal?
2020-06-19 04:22:15 +0000 UTCI'm taking a bit of a break today to recoup before I start editing. Also, we have some Kadal concept art on the way.
Snekguy
2020-06-18 22:47:50 +0000 UTCI'll probably be working on a Worlds Apart remaster, and Worlds Apart 2 next.
Snekguy
2020-06-17 22:57:35 +0000 UTCDo you have a Pinwheel story scheduled next?
Lincoln Neal
2020-06-17 22:49:34 +0000 UTC1200 word update, new content at 'There was heated discussion amongst the reptiles' Finished! 108,000 words in 58 days, not too shabby. Now, I just have to edit it, which should take just under a week.
Snekguy
2020-06-17 21:18:56 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “I would be glad to, if we ever make it back,”
Snekguy
2020-06-17 00:35:38 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “It is done,”
Snekguy
2020-06-15 23:32:32 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Tell it that the world’s orbit is degrading'
Snekguy
2020-06-14 23:07:18 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Over the threshold was another long corridor'
Snekguy
2020-06-14 01:34:21 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Caden suppressed his wonder'
Snekguy
2020-06-13 00:10:55 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'This is the only lead we have'
Snekguy
2020-06-12 00:12:03 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'They passed beneath a massive arch'
Snekguy
2020-06-10 17:27:51 +0000 UTC1500 word update, new content at 'He followed her gaze' Gotta get up super early tomorrow so I cut today's update a little short.
Snekguy
2020-06-09 23:12:48 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'As they neared, the city came into clearer view'
Snekguy
2020-06-09 02:33:18 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Their ruthless pace pushed them higher and higher'
Snekguy
2020-06-08 01:12:58 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Kadal groaned as he buried himself up to the base'
Snekguy
2020-06-07 01:35:27 +0000 UTC2300 word update, new content at “You sorcerers are certainly creative,”
Snekguy
2020-06-06 01:10:23 +0000 UTCGlad to hear it dude! I'm assuming you mean small dom/large sub? If so, you'll like the scenes I have planned.
Snekguy
2020-06-05 02:24:29 +0000 UTC1500 word update, new content at “We should get out of the water,” I wrote a full update today, but I wasn't satisfied with the rest of it, and I ran out of time. I'll add it to tomorrow's update to make it extra beefy.
Snekguy
2020-06-05 02:23:29 +0000 UTCKeep it up man. This one has something I've been looking forward to for a while. Loving it.
2020-06-05 01:01:15 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “People from beyond the Western shore are not so different,”
Snekguy
2020-06-03 19:51:37 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'She lay there before him'
Snekguy
2020-06-03 02:07:55 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Her loincloth rode low'
Snekguy
2020-06-02 01:06:36 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Caden drew back'
Snekguy
2020-05-31 23:26:40 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Their lips parted once more to leave them gasping for breath'
Snekguy
2020-05-31 01:03:05 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Why was her own heart quickening so?'
Snekguy
2020-05-30 01:02:17 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'A yelp of pain made her recoil'
Snekguy
2020-05-28 23:36:22 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'He took up a defensive stance, wiping away the blood that was leaking from the corner of his mouth.'
Snekguy
2020-05-27 21:19:07 +0000 UTCHad to run a lot of errands today so I'm gonna take a semi-day off.
Snekguy
2020-05-26 20:47:59 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Caden and Kadal stood frozen for a moment'
Snekguy
2020-05-26 01:01:09 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'As soon as they found a suitable place to rest'
Snekguy
2020-05-25 00:43:06 +0000 UTCI've actually written both of those stories! Heart of the Mountain - Female dragon x male Human Joint Venture - Female Turian x male Human You can find them in the master Pastebin, or by using the Ebooks tag.
Snekguy
2020-05-24 03:08:48 +0000 UTCOr FEMALE TURIAN X HUMAN
2020-05-24 02:29:01 +0000 UTCIt would be cool if FEMALE DARAGON X Human Male 😍
2020-05-24 02:27:37 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'She looked miserable'
Snekguy
2020-05-23 20:53:28 +0000 UTCGlad to hear it dude. Up next is either going to be a Worlds Apart remaster, or Worlds Apart 2. I'll do both, I just haven't decided the order yet.
Snekguy
2020-05-23 17:56:57 +0000 UTCSnek really loving this story, but I am curious what is your next story?
rocks217
2020-05-23 17:39:13 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “There will be time enough for that later.”
Snekguy
2020-05-23 00:47:23 +0000 UTCToday I went back and read through 20,000 words of content, making a few edits here and there with the goal of improving the flow of the story, and providing the characters with more believable motivations. You can find all of the edits in this Changelog, which lists all of the changes that I made so that you don't have to re-read anything, and you can continue to read the subsequent updates with no disruption. https://pastebin.com/rxUPNcCH
Snekguy
2020-05-21 21:57:53 +0000 UTCGlad you're enjoying it my guy!
Snekguy
2020-05-21 01:56:01 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'The coils of her tail tightened around his limbs'
Snekguy
2020-05-21 00:45:44 +0000 UTCNice
2020-05-20 00:40:33 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'The winding cave system'
Snekguy
2020-05-19 23:44:12 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'They ventured ever deeper into the cave'
Snekguy
2020-05-19 01:51:12 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “So I have hunters chasing me, and I have no idea where I’m going,”
Snekguy
2020-05-17 23:12:50 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'She began to butcher the animal with practiced speed and precision'
Snekguy
2020-05-17 00:29:43 +0000 UTCLooks like he gave a little too much away...
2020-05-16 06:03:00 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'She sat back down on the rock beside him'
Snekguy
2020-05-15 23:34:24 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'As they made their way through the corals'
Snekguy
2020-05-14 23:50:30 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'What was she doing?'
Snekguy
2020-05-13 22:00:54 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “And what fate is that?”
Snekguy
2020-05-13 00:33:58 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'She crossed her arms' I was dissatisfied with the quality of my previous update, I advanced the relationship between the characters far too quickly, so I've redone it and paced it better.
Snekguy
2020-05-11 18:43:42 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'She crossed her arms' Just a heads up, I'm going to take a bit of a semi-day off tomorrow and resume work on Monday, I got some stuff I need to do.
Snekguy
2020-05-10 00:57:20 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'She struggled more ardently'
Snekguy
2020-05-09 00:58:08 +0000 UTCYou know you don’t have to read his stories right? Also, ‘stink of the Na’vi’ (the tone of which gives the sense you think the Borealans are just copies of the Na’vi), have you looked at any of the concept art? In fact, even the first description of the Borealans in the first story will tell you that the only thing they have in common with the Na’vi is height
Hamerad
2020-05-08 22:54:20 +0000 UTCCliches of the Snekguy story: 1. Alien girl(s) bigger then human men. 2. Alien girl is aggressive hissing snarling thing who no man in their right mind would ever want (i.e. Borealan animals that stink of the Na'vi from Avatar). 3. Human man ends up dominating larger female for some reason or another. 4. Or alien girl dominates over human man. 4. And let's not forget: Alien girl has HUGE knockers.
David Boucher
2020-05-08 21:47:12 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'How long had it been since he’d bathed properly?'
Snekguy
2020-05-07 20:13:09 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “Keep still,”
Snekguy
2020-05-07 00:27:35 +0000 UTCThat was epic
Primemodial16
2020-05-06 04:59:26 +0000 UTC2500 word update, new content at 'The reptile lunged, swinging her heavy axe'
Snekguy
2020-05-06 00:28:08 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Caden rolled up the leg of his pants'
Snekguy
2020-05-04 18:26:42 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'She slowly climbed back down the rocky spire'
Snekguy
2020-05-04 01:56:10 +0000 UTCThis is an adventure story, there won't be any politics in this one.
Snekguy
2020-05-03 02:01:24 +0000 UTCHey Snek, is this more of an adventure story or the usual political drama?
Shazammy
2020-05-02 19:50:33 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'My visions have grown dark as of late'
Snekguy
2020-05-02 19:31:45 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'He unfurled his map and lay it flat on the rock'
Snekguy
2020-05-01 23:53:34 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Again, the desire to flee reared its head' Made a small edit to change the sextant to a compass just because it serves the same purpose in the plot while being far less complicated. Also tweaked the female's body type at the request of the client.
Snekguy
2020-04-30 22:10:26 +0000 UTC2500 word update, new content at 'Caden began to descend the sandy incline'
Snekguy
2020-04-29 22:55:14 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Caden began to point to items on the shelves'
Snekguy
2020-04-28 22:43:18 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'He had read many books on astronomy'
Snekguy
2020-04-27 23:30:07 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'It had taken several long days of walking' Had a minor miscommunication with the client, he just wanted fantasy races to be present in the setting, he didn't actually need me to make them a large part of the plot, so I nixed the part about the Elven forest.
Snekguy
2020-04-26 20:58:43 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'When he eventually came to a fork in the road'
Snekguy
2020-04-25 19:13:31 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'The inn came into view'
Snekguy
2020-04-24 22:56:18 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “All that I have left to give you now is my blessing,”
Snekguy
2020-04-23 21:41:37 +0000 UTCOoo! New story! But I got force myself to wait a bit because I know I’ll tear through it within a day lol.
Indexo's Vault
2020-04-23 02:57:07 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'The next item that he handed to Caden'
Snekguy
2020-04-22 23:18:13 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “Good, Caden!”
Snekguy
2020-04-21 20:50:59 +0000 UTCI really wanted to reply with a quote from a certain movie but I was able to stop myself.
2020-04-21 13:20:55 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “This is madness,”
Snekguy
2020-04-20 21:26:07 +0000 UTClike the theme already
rocks217
2020-04-20 02:08:08 +0000 UTComl I'm excited for this story already!
AnimeFem
2020-04-20 00:11:53 +0000 UTC