LOG:01 Updates
Added 2017-06-14 08:23:30 +0000 UTCI do not like going back to earlier pages to change things, but I'm trying to pitch the comic to some publishers so over the course of this month I'll be going back to polish up that first chapter.
Nothing really major. Mostly text edits, making some of the word balloons on the early pages look nicer, and fixing up only the worst of the art.
For example, on this page I added more detail to the shot of The Sprawl in the first panel, including the huge arches you see in a lot of t he LOG:02 city shots.
I cleaned up the word balloons, did a quick lighting edit to all of the panels, and got rid of the "X hours earlier" narration box. I'll leave it to more clever readers to realize that the opening of LOG:1 is actually Getta returning to the city after the events shown in the rest of the chapter.
