An Unwilling Monster e-book
Added 2021-05-09 07:50:09 +0000 UTCAttached is the full text of 'An Unwilling Monster' in pdf and epub forms, for anyone who prefers that to reading on royalroad. There's no new content in this version.
This is a different sort of story to unbound soul - while it ends fluffy, it starts off dark, and with a non-zero amount of body horror. This story does sorta tie in to unbound soul, and bonus story 1 is an Erryn POV chapter.
Comments
I really enjoyed it. I do have some criticism though @catfach (I always hesitate about criticising work like this, so please don't take it badly). I find that in the side stories, when the viewpoint is of someone despicable, I feel that their thought process don't seem realistic? You do have part of the self rationalisation where they rationalise their behavior but they feel somehow too one-sided? Too gratuitously evil? I've felt the same with Daniel's interlude too.
giom
2021-05-10 17:33:04 +0000 UTCIf you thought the first chapter was bad, it's lucky you didn't start reading past day 10. :) But that's a good point; I should put a reminder in the post that this is grimdark, of a sort.
cathfach
2021-05-09 08:19:14 +0000 UTCI'm not sure I even finished the first chapter of that one. Too dark for my taste.
Vorquel
2021-05-09 07:51:42 +0000 UTC
