Elyena's first test (short story)
Added 2023-03-27 01:50:51 +0000 UTC
**Edit: I've updated the image to work standalone! and added a few more frames.
I've been incredibly sick with the stomach flu this weekend, still recovering. I did want to share this
short story with you all tho.
A few months ago i said i'd want to venture in more explorative territories. Out of context I don't think I'd make this kinda stuff, but in short story format I think it works well. I don't want to spoil the short story, but it consists of mind uploading to a sex doll, and new forms of penetration. There *is* a sketch tucked away in the document but I suggest you read to it until it pops up. It needs the context.
It's about a 20 minute read, and i tried to keep it as lewd as possible without any distractions. I'm open to comments and suggestions/crit as this is my first lewd short story
Comments
Nipple penetration and especially nipple fucking is always good with me. Wasn't so keen on some of the other stuff, but still; appreciate trying new things for creativity
Rhona Whitefeather
2024-07-08 10:18:02 +0000 UTCAww ok I can try for more written stuff. Or maybe hire someone and art direct it.
Fyixen Fox
2023-05-19 13:55:29 +0000 UTCI liked the testing, I also liked the general plot of the story and the lore, the descriptions of the actions was also pretty good. I think the best part for me was when Elyena was helping her cock into the sleeve as it dripped with precum . But though the descriptions were good I think fleshing it out even more would take it from a 10/10 to a 20 really liked this new form of content
2023-05-19 13:04:20 +0000 UTCAw I'm glad ppl liked it. What did you like specifically? Lore of the characters or the Elyena testing?
Fyixen Fox
2023-05-19 12:59:06 +0000 UTCPlease more of this written content
2023-05-19 07:55:44 +0000 UTCAbsolutely amazing, also get well soon!
The Baneblade
2023-03-27 15:23:36 +0000 UTCLove it. Would enjoy more.
CuriousGe0rge24
2023-03-27 15:09:58 +0000 UTCAlso, loved the tit penetration!
Seba Fox
2023-03-27 02:36:10 +0000 UTCOh man, looking forward to stuffed animals and inflatables!
Seba Fox
2023-03-27 02:32:06 +0000 UTC
