A Girl Named Sue pg18 WIP
Added 2018-11-16 09:22:42 +0000 UTCJust wanted to let everyone know how much I appreciated the comments on the last page, I'm going to take everyone's advice into account for when I make the ink pass with these pages. :)
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nice catch Tim, I'll be sure to iron out the details in the final pass ;)
WereWorld
2018-11-28 20:23:10 +0000 UTCYep! Something I'm trying to incorporate in these changes :)
WereWorld
2018-11-18 06:35:55 +0000 UTCI'm suspecting that she might wind up on all fours in this one.
Kerlem
2018-11-17 15:20:25 +0000 UTCThere seems to be more hair on the back side of her ankle in the first shot of the third large panel than there is in the second shot. Other than that nitpick, it's coming along great!
Kerlem
2018-11-17 15:19:27 +0000 UTCWow. She is looking really good now. Much more like a beast before your redraw. The old one was good this is brilliant. I do love how you keep her head mostly human so that we see her terror about what is happening. Shall we assume that the final draw has more to do with the beast of biology 101 than the first chapter?
Nils
2018-11-17 06:37:22 +0000 UTCCurious to see how you illustrate her vocal changes. I'm thinking we got a preview in the bottom three panels.
Agent00Soul
2018-11-16 21:50:56 +0000 UTCHmm maybe replace the panel 2 perhaps? I'll keep these in mind Zock thanks :)
WereWorld
2018-11-16 18:10:50 +0000 UTCOne of my favourites... of course :). Really love it. Maybe the stretching would be a bit more effective if you rotated the view a little so the toes would be a bit more visible, because you will create a better reference of the stretching foot. Another comment, generally speaking, is that I miss a view from behind just before the stretching starts, but adding the new panel would be a completely mess :P. What do you think?
Zockereinstein
2018-11-16 16:02:18 +0000 UTC
