"Your Name"
Added 2025-06-17 00:34:53 +0000 UTCHere's a new one I'm working on! I loved the movie "Your Name" and thought it be fun to write the same concept of "Love so strong it defies the laws of time and space." Plus, my wife was due for another love song since it's been a couple of years haha Still needs tons of work but I really hope you like it! Let me know what you think! Love you all!
Fingers trace the empty sky
Drawing shapes where stars once lie
Whispers echo through the air
I swear I see you everywhere Your absence lingers everywhere
You and I
We’re fragments whole
Two halves stitched into one soul
Scattered far, yet bound by light
Through cosmic threads our hearts are tied
Footsteps fall through foreign lands
Calling out across the span
Torn away from paths we knew
But fate can’t keep me far from you
You and I
We’re fragments whole
Two halves stitched into one soul
Even if the world should break
We’ll find each other
We’ll find a way
Through the distance
Through the haze
Every shadow
And every maze
I’ll find the thread
And pull it tight
’Til stars converge and we unite’
You and I
We’re threads that bind
A tapestry of space and time
If galaxies and worlds divide
I’ll cross the void
To reach your light
Comments
The name drew me in immediately and the lyrics left me enraptured as its perfectly encapsulates a story i hope to finish. I look forward to whatever finishing touches you may add as it does end quite suddenly... i could see it drifting back into that hopeful yearning it begins with, a journey not yet completed but worth whatever it takes. Beautiful.
Zeliek
2025-06-19 14:27:44 +0000 UTCSo glad you liked it! I’ll try and finish it up!
Nathan Wagner
2025-06-18 16:06:42 +0000 UTCOh Nathan, this is beautiful! Wow! 10/10 for this love song!
Andre van Rooyen
2025-06-18 15:42:06 +0000 UTC
