Written in the Stars - A Look Towards the Moon
Added 2022-10-13 13:00:08 +0000 UTCNow we will be getting into the real juicy parts of the story...
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You not liking the chapter does not make it poorly written. The author made it abundantly clear that the third year was less important than others and would be brief, with the action truly picking up in fourth year. These chapters were merely meant to serve as ground work for that. Furthermore, he averages two chapters a week, which is a blistering pace for an author; it stands to reason that more nebulous chapters won't get the same detailed attention as more important ones. Finally, he has a set path in mind for the story. There doesn't need to be continuous, sweeping changes in every event for the story to unfold
michael H
2022-10-16 13:47:04 +0000 UTCThe ones defending the chapter, i have this to say. The problem is that since his second story, this author never delivered something so...poorly made. That is the best way i found to describe withouth being rude. I have no doubt whatsoever that there is plot related reasons for it to go like this, but that does not make it better for it. It still easily the worst chapter written since before his rewrite. Now, this is just my opinion. And i believe i have the right to make it. But i also have to point out. Sage Berthelsen, you where way out of line with your coment. Everyone here has a right to a opinion, and not everyone can express what they think is wrong through a comment. I miself almost left the same kind of comment. You literally left a comment not about the chapter, but atacking a fellow member. And that is childish, and low. The author does not need you to atack anyone here. If he did, he'd mobiliae the Discord, and hed only do it for a serious reason. Shame on you. Grow up, will you?
Jair Marinho Cardoso da Silva Júnior
2022-10-16 09:11:33 +0000 UTCI really like the idea of a Harry/Ana or a Harry/Lucinda pairing. I only hope that if you end up pairing Harry with Lucinda you come up with a way to either make Harry immortal or Lucinda mortal, since that would be weird to have a 90 year old Harry married to a woman who looks like she's not even 30 yet. So far you have never let me down with a pairing in any of your stories so I'm not too worried about you disappointing me with whoever Harry ends up in this one either.
Admiral M
2022-10-15 04:54:26 +0000 UTC
