When the Roses Bloom Again - Layer Upon Layer
Added 2022-05-12 13:01:03 +0000 UTCAnd here is the next chapter for you guys...
There will be another slight time jump during the next.
Comments
Excellent chapter as always. Cant wait for the next and the next story as well but you know i think you kind of need to improve the romance in your stories a little cause you always make harry this clueless and idoitic boy about this stuff i know it is part of the character but maybe you can give him some experience through another Fleeting romance before he gets in with the main female charchter. Anyway it was a thought that you May want to consider in your next stories, keep the good work.
Bob
2022-05-14 12:08:35 +0000 UTCDamn good chapter! Harry protects Minnie and the baby and Gellert gets the crap scared out of him! Doubt is eating away at him, even though he puts up a good front!
Steve Mccormick
2022-05-13 14:07:10 +0000 UTCAn excellent chapter, as always Mr McCusker! Phoenix fire as a magical attack because of a wand core is new and creative. The conversation with the wand maker & Gellert was done well and I'm actually surprised the wand maker wasn't killed for what he said at the end of the conversation. Although, I'm concerned that Gellert is aware of Harry's family history. Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter!
Sunny
2022-05-12 22:34:28 +0000 UTC`More information comes piling in. So much going on, and it feels like I might miss some things, however I look forward to each and every chapter of this story.
Mark Quaker
2022-05-12 15:00:12 +0000 UTCSo his wand Phoenix Fire traveled him back when he was trapped with grindelwald in Greece(?) and now he learned to control it. Neat. Wonder if he'll channel the basilisk side and start going Medusa on these fools. Puts into perspective how wealthy Harry is now. Being a hit-Wizard really pays well. His one job as a translator paid for half of this mansion. I forget how much his thief job paid but it's nice to see the goblins still peeved. Id never trust them with my gold or investments, I'd just go the muggle route.
Yeno Memevig
2022-05-12 13:54:04 +0000 UTCLoved this chapter. I wonder if we will see Harry and Minerva telling the flamels, Rosalina or the rest of their friends.
martha cantu
2022-05-12 13:50:47 +0000 UTCI really love this story!!
Romane McLeod
2022-05-12 13:31:18 +0000 UTCWoo! Can't wait to read this tonight!
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2022-05-12 13:01:34 +0000 UTC