I've already started and they accepted the sketches for this 2nd page. I'm going to clean it up. You can give your opinion.
1 Update- cleanup of sketches and start of color.
2 Update- girls are brainwashed.
3 update- i like panel 1
4 update - Only the 2 small panels above and the sounds are missing, then editing lights and shadows, I'm about to make a lycra version of panel 1, I think it would look good!