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CC: Chapter 29 – A Trap

I brought out the large false rank 4 helmet in front of Roaring Twilight on top of the mountain. Its eyes went wide. “Try it out,” I replied. Roaring Twilight picked it up in his massive paws and slid it on. There were spots left open for the ears, and the back laid flat against his spine. It wasn’t a human helmet, that was for sure.

“This good, comfortable too. Sturdy as well,” the beast said while appreciating it. There was a slight bit of padding built into the helmet Roaring Twilight turned his head around. “Very well follow me. The full moon is three nights from now, so you can get one of the flowers then. Just one, unless you have something else?” it asked.

“A spatial ring, a low rank one in exchange for a second flower,” I told it. I held it up and it brought an eye close to the ring. I had my sword in one hand. I wasn’t taking any chances. “It is where I put and take stuff from. While a bit small, once you get to rank 5 it will be quite useful,” I told the beast and it nodded at that.

After a bit of back and forth, I slid the ring into a slot on the helmet after Roaring Twilight took it off for a moment, making sure not to leave myself open to an attack. I had left a few rank 1 spirit stones inside. “Small, but useful if I find a trinket,” it said with a nod. “Definitely worth a second flower.”

With my half of the trade completed we set off at a fast pace. Beasts would often make gardens, or grow them once they hit rank 4 and above. To supplement their draw of the energy of heavens and earth. Lesser beasts would stay away, while higher ranked beasts would mostly respect other beasts’ gardens.

Their bottleneck to the fifth rank and beyond was worse than the humans’ bottleneck. I still wasn’t sure why it was so tough, but since they gained the ability to shapeshift, it most certainly had to do with that. My personal guess after months of hunting and observing Roaring Twilight was their body would become too big and they had to shapeshift to survive.

The square-cube law limited the size of creatures, even in cultivation land. It basically was the rule that the bigger the object, the more its internal volume needed to be devoted to support structures like bones and muscles to move it. That was why the bones of an elk were larger than the bones of dear, since the elk was bigger. There was also the issue of heat transference.

I had noted that Roaring Twilight was a lot warmer than the other beasts the few times I came close. It radiated off a lot more heat. It also liked to plow through water sources. While cultivation might help with its size, there were other facets of biology that limited the beast.

It had also grown another foot, or a half a meter in length from when I had met it. Again, not easily noticeable, but it was getting bigger. That was the confirmation I needed that the beast’s bottleneck was one of size, where they would be forced to alter their organs and move their consciousness into their core.

They had brains like regular creatures, but if they could shapeshift, that meant their brain had to shift as well. Otherwise, shapeshifting was pointless. If the brain shapeshifted, that meant they had to have their consciousness elsewhere.

Unfortunately, higher ranked beasts were very rarely fought, or their cores captured. I had no idea how the Sect Leader would get rank 6 refined beast essence, but he would somehow do that. He had promised on my return that he would have it and be ready to integrate it into my body. I just needed to pay for the refined beast essence, and he would handle all the arrangements as my master.

My guess was that some more martial sects had higher ranked beasts imprisoned, or killed such beasts, and extracted everything they could out of them. Regardless, my cultivation progress for body cultivation would now occur and I wouldn’t rip my body apart or explode. While an elder would not steal a low leveled item like a low ranked spatial ring, anything above rank 5, needed to be handled with care in case someone got ideas.

I was more than content to let the rank 8 Sect Leader take the lead procuring the difficult cultivation ingredient and figuring out the technical applications of applying it to my body. While he might have been annoyed with me working with a beast, I could also tell he was impressed I had fulfilled his requirements so quickly.

All these thoughts went through my head as I followed Roaring Twilight and kept an eye out on my surroundings. I had a plan for what I wanted to do, and a plan of what needed to happen no matter what. If I returned without a rank 4 beast core, the Sect Leader would not be happy with me. While it made no sense for him to betray me or kill me, I couldn’t afford to cross his bottom line.

He would be more than happy to kick me out of the sect or punish me, or it could be what he wanted me to think. Unlike a computer game, I had no easy measure to judge how annoyed or pleased he was with me. I knew I would eventually screw up or hit a rough patch, and I needed to build up good will until that point.

Roaring Twilight while useful, was not a friend. It was an inhuman intelligence, which would kill me without the slightest bit of hesitation. I also suspected there would be trap or betrayal coming up in some way. With the direction and distance, we were traveling.

Before it was a three-day loop around the mountain. I wasn’t worried about running into another level 4 beast. But this time we were headed in a straight-line path away from the mountain outpost. That meant Roaring Twilight would ‘accidentally’ lead me into the path of another beast, or perhaps claim its garden for his own.

I had prepared a surprise with the support of the Sect Leader who was content to let me handle this situation I had created. He had made it clear he wouldn’t be bailing me out and there would be no secret elder or member watching me. I gripped my sword tighter and kept my head on a swivel once we cleared the previous hunting area.

With Roaring Twilight in directly in front of me no other beasts bothered us. I did see the occasional one watching at a distance, but they quickly left as we traveled. There was no large pack behind us either, when I called for a halt after a day for a quick water and bathroom break. I checked behind us for a kilometer quickly and there was no beast horde that Roaring Twilight had formed.

That meant it was a probably a high-level ambush of some kind. If there wasn’t, then I planned to have an honest conversation with Roaring Twilight, but I doubted that would happen. Humans and beasts were enemies. Still, Roaring Twilight had kind of grown on me like a dog. But just like tigers and bears weren’t real pets, Roaring Twilight was not a pet, it was a sentient creature that wanted to eat me.

It was evening of the third day when we finally slowed down and entered a steep canyon area with a small stream. There weren’t cliffs on either side, but very steep tree and rock covered slops. There were also a lot more motes in the air.

That was when I saw the ambush that was planned. The stream was connected to a pool of water and there were several plants growing around it pool. A small waterfall fell down from an actual cliff. The ambush was in the form of a hawk that was watching from a nearby tree. I kept my face controlled as I scanned the rest of the area.

“Here we are. You can get your flowers when the moon rises, and then we shall part ways. When the time comes I will eat you little human,” Roaring Twilight said. I was nervous as the elder beast was watching me from a tree. There was no way that Roaring Twilight didn’t know about it laying in wait. I didn’t turn my back to it, since I didn’t want a fight to break out now.

I could feel my life hanging my thread. I had no frame of reference to determine what rank the elder beast was. If it was rank 5, I had a chance. If it was rank 8, then I was instantly dead. “Is this place yours?” I asked Roaring Twilight.

“No. You will only take what we agreed on and nothing more,” it said with a growl. It clearly didn’t want to elaborate, and I didn’t press Roaring Twilight.

“Two blue moon orchids. That’s all I want,” I replied while scanning the other plants for anything valuable. There were several valuable plants, but no red sun rose, or green ocean lily. This was clearly not a simple garden in the wilderness. “I won’t be coming back either or mentioning this place.” I added.

Roaring Twilight seemed surprised, but the fact it hadn’t said anything about this was more confirmation that this was a trap. “Good,” it grunted. I kept my sword ready in my hands. The beast disguised as a hawk was still sitting on a branch and watching me.

If it could hide itself, it probably didn’t care against a baby cultivator like me. And that was reference to my low cultivation rank, not my stature. The sun slowly set. There was a low amount of cloud cover in the sky.

The full moon was out and came out from behind a cloud. Ten blue moon orchids materialized around the pond at various locations. I approached them and pulled out a trowel. I had to put my sword on the ground next to me, but no attack came as I carefully moved two of the plants into carrying containers. I sealed the containers up and carefully put them away in my spatial ring.

“Or deal is completed, I am free?” Roaring Twilight asked me.

“Once I leave. Otherwise, you would try and eat me. Consider it fulfilled three days from now,” I said as I picked up my sword again. The beast disguised as a hawk was still watching me.

“Three days then, goodbye little human.” I wanted to repeat my name, but no need to leave it behind. That had been a foolish mistake.

“Goodbye Roaring Twilight Upon The Rocks,” I said and quickly left, retracing the route that had been used to arrive to this place deep in the wilderness. I wanted to attack or say something, but I couldn’t with that elder beast watching. If I mentioned about wanting to kill another rank 4 beast, I had no doubt it would intervene. The Sect Leader would not be happy with me, but picking a fight with an elder beast was beyond me.

I occasionally checked behind me and noticed a large source of energy of the heavens and earth in the sky following me. Dammit! It was the elder beast. It would definitely attack in three days. I kept the same pace, since this was a marathon, not a sprint. Once I left the canyon I made a zig zag pattern.

The outpost would be a tomb if I went there. I needed to make it back to the sect, but that was a month away on foot. This meant I needed to lose an elder beast that could shapeshift and had three days leeway to do so. I pulled out scent concealer and repellant and used both liberally. Once I cleared the canyon, I tossed scent attractor to the sides behind me as I kept rushing through the forest in the night.

Dawn came, and the few beasts I had seen were moving towards the scent attractor at the start of the canyon. I altered my path to kill them to stir up the beasts in the area. That elder beast clearly valued its garden. I had no idea why Roaring Twilight was allowed to trade me two flowers, but it was. Perhaps some sort of communal garden and it used its share to pay me?

Regardless, the elder beast was following me, which meant I needed to force it away. Trying to fight it was like an ant trying to fight an elephant. There was little to no chance of winning. That meant I had to threaten the garden itself with a beast tide. My zig zag pattern intercepted several beasts. The elder beast was too high up in the air to smell all the alchemic products I had used, but it would quickly realize what I was doing. This was the most dangerous point.

More and more beasts began to arrive, one every ten minutes, now one every three minutes. They were quickly surging in this direction. Their corpses littered the forest. I killed another rank 3 beast and then quickly departed. I was grateful for all the martial training and hunting I had done, since my arms were tired from swinging so much.

I raced by more beasts, but they ignored me since I used the scent concealer and had left a lot of corpses around the entrance to the canyon. I felt something pressing down on me and quickly dove to the side while bringing my sword up. The elder beast swooped through where I had been and quickly turned into a humanoid beast.

The transformation was near instant. I saw the surge of energy twist out and ground from its core to form a new shell around it. A beast’s head and a man’s body. It was completely naked but was covered in fur.

“I was going to wait three days as part of my favor to Roaring Twilight, but I have a beast tide to deal with,” it casually said with only a soft growl behind the words and advanced.

“Junior greets senior. May I know the name and rank of the beast that is going to kill me?” I asked. This was purely for information and my personal knowledge. If it was a rank 8 beast, I would just slit my wrists and save myself the agony of being eaten.

“I am Water Running Over The Rocks, child of Whirling Flames From The Heavens. Roaring Twilight Upon The Rocks is my sibling. A young foolish one letting you visit our garden, but I am rank 6 beast and will not let a human sully things they are not meant to have.”

The beast was walking towards me and my heart began to speed up. “I understand senior,” I said and brought up my right arm to cover my eyes which I shut tightly. I opened my mouth wide and exhaled. My left arm swiped out and I called on a flashbang from my low-ranked spatial ring. Activating it and pushing it towards the beast that was almost upon me.

BANG!

“Ahhhh!” There was a scream of pain as I felt the energy wash over me. It was a known device and each one cost 2 rank 3 spirit stones. One to charge it, and the other for the production. I lunged forward with my sword, whipping it around, using the Parting Cloud style.

The blade’s edge dragged across the beast’s chest, refusing to cut that deeply. Still there was a sizable wound left behind. I was already retreating back and dodging to the side when it lunged forwards. I tossed out another flashbang and an entire sack of dried hot sauce powder. There was another bright explosion, sound, and energy, which made my head spin even though I was ready.

The red dust settled over the wounded rank 6 beast and I quickly set off in a random direction. I quickly put my sword away. The blood I had drawn could be collected later and was quite valuable. That was only a flesh wound, and it would quickly recover in a few minutes. I wouldn’t have been able to kill it.

The fact my blade only cut half a finger’s depth into the beast was all the proof I needed that it was too tough for me to kill. With its ability to shapeshift it would quickly heal. That was why at similar ranks, beasts held the advantage in the upper ranks, their shapeshifting. Still those were valuable minutes to get distance and the beast tide needed to be dealt with.

I put everything I could into running and getting far away from this place. My hope was the garden was worth more than killing me. And that I would get enough distance to lose the elder beast. I couldn’t stop running until I got back to the sect no matter what.

These preparations could also have been used to ambush and kill Roaring Twilight, but that wasn’t possible now. All I could do was hopefully escape. It was a shame I didn’t have a chance of killing the rank 6 beast. It clearly was overconfident in defeating me and had every right to be. With 4 ranks separating us and its innate abilities, there was just no way to defeat it.

After ten minutes, I altered my direction once more, with my route turning into a long curve. Every minute I wasn’t discovered meant a lot more area that rank 6 beast Water Running had to explore. Beasts relied on their sight and smell, they had no special vision of the energy of heavens and earth like I did. While there was some energy sense, it wasn’t very strong and more tied into their sense of smell.

With the tree cover of the forest, I wasn’t too worried about being spotted, but I avoided open areas and streams. After a day of running, I was exhausted. I had traveled for three days and then ran for a day.

Finding a place between some large rocks, I used more scent concealer and pulled out a large gray blanket. Wrapping myself up in the blanket, I hid in the damp docks, and fell asleep instantly.

When I awoke, I wasn’t dead, and the beasts had not found me. I put the blanket away and set off again carefully. While I was celebrating in my head, I wouldn’t fully celebrate until I returned to the sect and was safe from the beasts.

I was disappointed I wasn’t able to team up with Roaring Twilight and ride it around. Or when it became a rank 5, it would travel with me. These were foolish thoughts. Beasts and humans weren’t friends. But enemies based on their very nature and needs. Just like the gazelle couldn’t be friends with the lion. It was the same for beasts and humans.

It took a month and a half to get back to the sect, but I finally showed up and presented myself to the Sect Leader once again. I explained everything that happened and my choices. He didn’t say anything as he stared intently at me.

“You kept your sword in your ring this entire time?” he asked me.

“I didn’t run into any other beasts and avoided them,” I replied. He considered that carefully. “I doubt refined beast essence is possible, but the blood should be worth something, regardless. Unless you know another way?” I asked.

“Elder Liu Chen will be here shortly. He will know such a thing.” A few minutes later the elder who had a lot of crazy ideas about my cultivation showed up.

“Beast blood? Really, you called me for something so mundane?” the elder complained and the Sect Leader sighed.

“Blood from a living rank 6 beast, on a rank 5 sword. As you know Yuan Zhou requires refined rank 6 beast essence. He wounded the beast in question.”

“Oh, now that is interesting. Single combat?” the elder asked me.

“Yes elder, I wounded it across the chest when it took a humanoid form and was distracted,” I said.

“Interesting. And the blade has been in your spatial ring?” he asked which I confirmed. “The essence would be weaker than essence extracted in the regular manner,” he said.

“We can supplement that, but it will help the later ranks if he ever makes it there. A trace of the martial Dao,” the Sect Leader said.

“Indeed. I have been considering the best Daos that he should pursue at the later ranks. With four mind cores, it would allow for four Daos. Anything of a martial bent would be enhanced by such a choice. But enhancing it to match regular rank 6 refined beast essence will not be simple. A lot of energy would be needed to purify the blood and slowly enhance it over time. It would take three years at least, if we had the spirit stones.”

“Would 1,200 rank 3 spirit stones do?” the Sect Leader asked, and Elder Liu Chen considered the question while I listened in. Like doctor’s discussing a patient, I only got cursory input. “It would be possible. And it would be an interesting diversion. The ring with the sword,” I quickly handed it over to the elder without question. He stared intently for a moment.

“Preserved quite decently. I will handle this. Give it three years or so and it will be done,” he replied.

“Thank you Elder Liu Chen.”

“An interesting diversion and seeing two cultivations in a single body will be quite interesting,” he replied and left. I glanced over at the two blue moon orchids’ carrying cases on the Sect Leader’s desk.

“Thank you, Sect Leader,” I told him and bowed my head. I didn’t know what he would do with the refined beast essence he already had, but I am sure he would figure out something to do with such a treasure.

“Since you are succeeding on your path of defiance, I shall make things easier for you. However, you did fail in a direct order from myself and allowed such a helmet to be used, and the beast in question to not be killed.” I was silent and wondered what headache I would have to deal with. “But I am not unreasonable. The extra blue moon orchid makes up for you what you did and the presence of an elder beast. The fact you wounded it shows you tried at least.”

“If anyone asks, you were exploiting and tricking the beasts to get resources, not aiding them. But the presence of an elder messed things up,” the Sect Leader decided. I let out a sigh of relief at this.

“Thank you, Master,” I said and bowed my head.

“Elder Liu Chen’s time is valuable as well as several elders I have working on things pertaining to your cultivation. The blue moon orchid you recovered for the sect, will go a long away in terms of silencing any complaints about your cultivation path.” I nodded at this.

“Now I wait?” I asked.

“And keep cultivating. Your age and aligned motes?” he asked me.

“Age 27 and approximately 400,000 motes are aligned. I am going to be starting on the valve structures soon for my soul cultivation, since the channels are progressing well.”

“Good, you cannot slow down, no matter what, and your progress while hunting is acceptable. You are going with Elder Liu Chen’s valve structure.” That was kind of a question and also wasn’t. I was an experimental platform of this elders and what kept their interest. Liu Chen had agreed easily enough once realizing it was for my cultivation. If I didn’t take the path of most interesting and complicated cultivation, they would lose interest.

“Yes, Sect Leader,” I replied.

“That means for Meridian Attunement, you will need a null metal and a focusing gem,” he said with a long sigh. “Those are things that cannot be purchased easily. I will inquire about them, but it won’t be simple. Also, the number of cores you need are immense. It isn’t possible here on the continent most likely, but I am hesitant to send you into the Firmament before you can use techniques at Core Formation,” the sect leader said out loud.

“Due to the danger,” I added in.

“Yes, the danger is immense. Rank 8 cultivators are nothing but cabbages on the side of the road, with how easily their lives can be plucked. But the sheer amount of resources you need leaves no other option, unless you come up with something else to get the items needed,” he explained.

“It is a death sentence?” I asked and the Sect Leader nodded.

“It is. Even with you absurd luck and heaven’s favored path, you will be in a precarious position.”

“There might be another way. I was considering heading towards Imperial City to see if I could do business there,” I said. The Sect Leader looked at me as if I was truly brain damaged.

“You can try. But you will stay until we can apply the refined beast essence. Then you may depart and see the futility of your business aspirations first hand. If you want to cultivate you will have to fight and kill. The beasts you have killed so far, are but a drop in the ocean of blood you will have unleash.”

“I would prefer spreadsheets to viscera Master,” I replied.

“If you succeed in Imperial City and aren’t taken for everything you are worth or give up since all your ideas have been thought of already, then I will bow my head towards you as an apology for my doubt in front of the entire,” the Sect Leader said. My eyes went wide at that.

He clearly doubted my business skills, and I was doubting them now as well after everything I had learned and this new challenge. But the Sect Leader taking responsibility like this would be a huge deal. The Sect Leader apologizing would be the equivalent of the sect apologizing. The amount of face he would lose and give me would be massive. It just wasn’t done. A cultivator at the threshold of immortality apologizing to someone in Foundation Establishment in public, was a legendary event. He probably didn’t think it would happen, but was willing to admit if he was wrong.

“I will do my best Sect Leader,” I replied.

“You have gone against my predictions twice. Returning successful from the astral plane and getting the blue moon orchid. I thought both would end in your death far away from the sect.” I noted he expected me to get the beast cores. Well, any cultivator could get there with focus and time. The amount was a lot but not impossible.

I left the blue moon orchids with him. Five days later I also got back my low ranked spatial ring and my sword. I was busy constructing the three six-fold valves per channel and the non-valve valves that Elder Liu Chen had suggested.

His physical model made it a lot easier to understand. Not having moving parts made it easy. The trick with regular valve construction was to make the plane that formed weak. It was a simple matter of not putting as much focus into it. Unfortunately, the plane that formed between the motes was all or nothing.

The one edge was connected to the side of the channel would bend slightly. There was no good way to set the strength of these barriers. There was very rigid and almost nothing. But the amount of pressure between the top and the bottom was different for each cultivator. That was why valves had to start at the bottom and have multiple valves for the best effect without guessing.

I would use the weakest three valve structures at the far edge of the channels, and then Liu Chen valve design for the remaining seven tenths of my channels. Since I had to fit it inside the existing channels I had constructed, it would be a bit narrower than I wanted.

My attunement would have to be perfect no matter what. Normally cultivators put one valve by their meridians and another at their core. Enterprising cultivators might go for a third in the middle. But with Liu Chen’s design, the flow of energy would be forced back on itself with a loop.

I had been fiddling with how I would lay out the motes and the walls for such a valve inside my channels for a while. Ever since he had explained his design, I was working to figure it out and looking at how water flowed in carved out models.

The real trick was to have the main path slightly spiral inside my triangular channel with the loops alternating directions. This would disperse the movement of energy inside my channels, instead of focusing it to one side. It was even more complex, but I was used to it by now. The goal of the valves was to stop the energy from flowing out, once it was pulled in by my meridians.

A cultivator could contain so much energy on their own just using their meridians. But the amount of drops my cores needed was immense. So immense, I had to have valves to contain all that energy, or there would be leakage. I couldn’t afford to lose a single drop with how much I had to get. As I finished up the valves in three years’ time, I could then move onto the body cultivation channels for my central core.

After that I needed to get the Pill of Peace, so I could do mind cultivation and align my motes with the world itself. I wasn’t entirely sure how that would work. Aligning motes with my body or soul was a simple process of focusing on them and pushing them into place. I could feel the difference on which direction I could push the motes inside of my body.

But apparently mind cultivation used a separate methodology. Something to look at investigate during my next three years while I wasn’t cultivating, so I would be read, for when the pill of peace was finally completed.

Comments

Thank you for the chapter. “*Or deal is completed, I am free?” Roaring Twilight asked me. ->“*Our deal is completed, I am free?” Roaring Twilight asked me.

Koza0

I don't understand honestly. All cultivation stories are like this. Costs and power are always exponential. When high level cultivators call mortals ants, they aren't lying. It's essentially that. Other sects having issues with him hogging the resources? A huge part of the driving force behind cultivation, in any story, is competition over resources. I especially love that cultivators are shown as logical and and calculating. It's always annoyed me when millennia old cultivators act like teenagers. The elders here are investing in our MC as an experimental startup. Greater amounts with greater success. If he fails, then they're out some money but would have gotten some returns from the research and data already collected. If he succeeds, they make it big. It's a transaction. And that makes sense. As for the risks involved, again, all cultivation stories are like this. Becoming the one huge success out of zillions. They have to beat the odds time and time again. The bad ones have hot blooded morons running head first into trouble and then getting away with it because plot armor. This is an MC who is cautious and calculating most of the time while getting lucky once in a while. Regarding side characters dying, I don't see the problems with this. This is a side effect of immortality. Only stories that refuse to let the MC's feelings ever get hurt let the MC drag along overy single bit character that's ever turned up on his path.

Anonymonous

I just realized this is essentially a story about scope creep due to project requirements being added by elders/stakeholders. A lot of the scope explosion is also due to starting design/development before the problem-space was adequately understood.

Neil H

I agree with everything said, i said it wrong. While the elders are sponsoring him with tools, they arent funding him. I suppose the argument i meant to make was given the emphasis on there are limited resources, what he is doing is going to make it MUCH harder for cultivators in the future. Other sects are going to have issue with this, as would anyone who sees what he is doing.. he alone is going to make a negative impact on future potential for all sects. On the family point, yes he was going to leave them behind, but the later chapters seem to be actively limiting any new characters added, meaning the people introduced at the beginning still are the most filledbout. New ones are being removed very quickly, or they all are just 'mad scientist' With the lack of characters i feel like the story is reading like a incremental idle rpg. Numbers get bigger, he gets quest, goes to quest, lucks through quest. Turns in quest, numbers get bigger. And with success coming from luck, a lack of characters or dialogue, its just a list of his internal monologue, a chapter of a÷b=c and variables will update the next chapter; there is no feeling of payoff. I get its 'calculating cultivation', but this really could be turned into a idle rpg. Im glad you all are enjoying it, it just feels like it could go slower with more detail and less silly progression. Instead of leaving his plane of existence to get the astral shard and only living by being hurled by an eldritch nightmare on a whim, for the FIRST step into cultivation, he instead needs to get a rare resource for an array, and he needs to leverage existing connections and resources maybe even taking a loss to get it.

Something

Also, it probably isn’t impossible to trade for some of the ingredients for the pill if peace. If the sect is able to nurture the extra plant they’ve gotten their hands on, they may be able to make a deal with someone else for a plant maybe a couple centuries down the line in exchange for one lily or rose now.

_mori

They aren’t funding him. He pays for almost everything he gets himself. Whatever else he gets is little compared to what he acquires himself. If it’s within the sect master’s power to acquire, they’d probably help him from what we’ve seen (like with the beast essence), but he still has to pay for it. He has to get the ingredients for the pill of peace himself, and had to get the astral shard himself. And he’ll likely also have to reimburse the sect for the null metal in some way later down the line. The sect doesn’t believe he’ll succeed, but the fact is that with his apparent talents, he may very well be the only person who can. Him being able to see qi motes is evidently not his only talent (I dunno if it was glossed over, but it didn’t seem like others have the ability to hear astral shards or speak with the elder-level astral beasts). Who knows what other facet of his talents will help him through his cultivation in the future?

_mori

Y’all make valid points especially with it seeming like he’s lost (some of) his agency. That isn’t necessarily a bad thing though (for now at least). With the light that’s been shed on the consequences of his cultivation choices, the elders and sect leader stepping him to give him the much needed guidance at the cost of some of his autonomy seems reasonable. It also grounds the realism themes of the novels by making it so that YZ can’t just do everything on his own, at least not without running out of time or relying heavily on plot armor. And that these elders help him out of their own interests rather than spontaneous altruism tones down the impact of plot armor. Regardless of all their help, he’ll still need to do gather the bulk of his cultivation needs by himself, whether it be through business dealings or venturing into the firmament.

_mori

I do think part of the problem is time skips. Author skipped a lot of the repetitive stuff, which is good but also didn't give us a lot of time to revise our expectations. We didn't see his months of struggling to find beasts before that cat showed up. We also didn't see the numerous close calls that Yuan Zhou had fighting tier 3 beasts. it all seemed to go smoothly according to plan. I also do want to point out about the "3rd tiers being cabbages"... they actually aren't. Yuan Zhou broke the rules by partying with a beast. which is probably a rule to prevent people from doing *exactly what he's doing*. See, if you kill enough tier 3s a tier 4 will come and kill you, that's its job. and if you kill that... a beast tide happens, which could kill *most* cultivators. Yuan Zhou found a hack, and they could have gotten bapped for it by the imperial sect. His little hack was okay when he didn't know better, but now that he does, he can't do the same again.

MagicWafflez

well, first of all... the elders are only contributing labor. so no, they *can't* fund lots of cultivators with these resources, as they're solely his own. They have no down side. The get to do an interesting project and the lab rat counts the money that sells himself. If you remember when he first joined the sect, he listed the cost of hiring professionals two stages under the elders to do the work. it was ruinously expensive and not enough. Thus, to keep the elders(investors) interested, he had to make some concessions such as adding tesla valves in his channels instead of six flapped ones. I'm not thrilled with him being forced either, but it's a small price to pay considering how ruinously expensive it would be to pay for the labor himself (even the weaker array he needs for third and fourth stage is too expensive for him). As for everyone being dead... he's going a *lot* faster than you seem to think? he'll be done with tier 2 in less than ten years, and author confimed next book is back to business so he *will* find a niche in the capital.

MagicWafflez

If he wouldn't get the blood sect leader would have to somehow take care of it but now it just needs to be refined with cores he got. The pill from what I understand is the reason (or one of) he may need to leave the continent if there won't be any great success in the business department cause those 2 ingredients are beyond his reach, especially the ocean one.

kiewitz

well, the essence is weak enough that they need the same number of cores they were going to use to buy the blood, in order to make the blood stronger.... that said, *this* blood has a martial dao infused in it, which will help his mind cultivation later. as for the other two flowers, he set aside twice the number of stones required to buy the fire flower, it's only the ocean one he still lacks. I *think* he's going to start shenanigans for it next, after he's a bit further along... he gets stronger with more motes aligned afterall.

MagicWafflez

Exactly, I guess you could say his path was arbitrarily inflated. But that was by his sect. He was basically shown that to reach his path would cost a ton. Then the sect decided since his path already seemed like a death sentence why not go all out. Which made the cost even more ridiculous.

Relken

If I understood this correctly the blood he got will be the rank 6 essence he needed? So the sect leader will not need to procure that for him? And was it mentioned before who would provide the pill of peace? Doesn’t he still need to find 2 more ingredients for it?

Derek Walker

Weren’t the early characters dying of old age a given from the beginning? As for his old earnings now being meager, that’s doesn’t trivialize his earlier work. That income allowed him to 1) collect the extreme amount of notes he needed and 2) give him the infrastructure and revenue needed to setup an information network in the capital where he will likely launch his next businesses. His plans are insane, but he’s working on collecting some of the rarest resources himself or funding them with the beast cores he collects. He gets help from the elders but mostly that’s due to the fact they see him as a free lab rat to run experiments on, and most of it is in labor not materials. As for the elders dictating his life, isn’t that basically any cultivation story in the beginning if the main character is at the beginning stages? He still has his agency on the micro level of how he gets resources and comes up with business deals, which again is about normal for this point in a cultivation story

Derek Walker

The fact that the only reason these elders are really helping him is cuz they're using him as a test bed for their theories, and using his heaven defying luck to make it through (if its absolutely impossible to complete that test, he will die, which is information they want so they'll never test it again. If he doesn't die, it proves they're on the right track)

Root

I want to leave a small review, because I feel the first portion of this story appeals do a different kind of reader than where the story is now. I've definitely lost interest in the story at this point.. I feel the start was strong, with a mix of characters and planning. After a bit of thinking to my lack of interest or caring about the story now is because of how pointless the start of the story is. Characters that were introduced will be dead of old age before he finishes the next step. MC went from being clever and motivated to it now being completely pointless, the amount he spent the first portion of his life earning doesn't pay for a day - in fact if he had less success perhaps he wouldn't have embarked on this. All roads point to the exact same thing happening to this portion as well, 100 chapters from now he will be consuming entire planets, snorting the bones of a cultivator 20 realms above him. The cost of him doing this path is just silly. No Sect would want him doing this - How many cultivators could be funded with a tiny portion of what he is doing, be at a higher level and be less likely to self implode (do the elders know he has plot armor?). Plus all of his direction in life is no longer his own. Its do what the elders tell MC to do, struggle to do so. Its a very long time to be doing a list, and a special point has been made to state "There is no other way, there are laws blocking you from doing anything creative on your own." So just go plunder a continents worth of resources, hit that 0.01% chance 20 more times and we will be able to get to the third level. I know he's going to succeed, he never fails.

Something

Small thing your forgot in one paragraph: "I will apologize in front of the entire" Entire what? I think you forgot the "sect" at the end? Not sure, because I don't know exactly because my english is not my native language^^ Aaand, more importantly: we need MOAR chapters! Haha

EsZeus

I am not very good when it comes to giving reviews since my vocabulary for describing how novels feel is pretty terrible and to be fair other people might have already said it better than me. But if I have to give my two cents it feels like his cultivation's path difficulty got bloated with every new addition to his already difficult path. Now don't get me wrong I am not saying that his cultivation should be made easier, what I feel like is that it should have being given to us readers in a more concise way. What I mean is that if feels redundant to me that we keep getting told that his already impossible path is getting more impossible it loses effect after a while and feels like its trying to hard. To me it would have feel less jarring if he had chosen to go on the three cultivation paths at once from earlier in the series instead of each path being added on as the novel progress. Anyway that's just my feelings from up to this point and I am not a author I never written anything so take what I say with a grain of salt. Sorry if this sounded rude by the way, it is not being to be, am just not as eloquent when it comes to giving reviews like this.

quiscon

The diagrams of the Tesla valve in 2d and 3d format seems to have shown up in the "Calculating Cultivation" diagram section of the reference post. So well spotted. I don't really get what its supposed to do. I just can't visualize it. So I guess I'll be watching some moving models on Youtube until the penny drops.

Valderan

I think Relken was trying to remind you of how the frame of reference is changing as his journey continues with an implication of how the MC seems to be getting assisted but also low key baited. I know you get this but it might be the speed at which this has progressed. For comparison to a city builder isekai, $100 is a lot of money to a homeless person, not so much to someone with a minimum wage job but by the time you start talking about constructing hydro dams to provide power for your aluminum refinery its not even large enough to describe a rounding error on the spreadsheet. This has functionally occurred within 10 chapters I believe, which is a bloody fast progression. I think your main point is solid and its one I mentioned a few chapters back that the requirements that have been piled on him are an absolute crap ton without a lot of time for us to absorb context. Once the sect leader showed up and had some expert consultants brought in then they quite rationally pointed out every weakness and how to resolve it without weakening the plan. His plan was quite absurd so the resolutions are absurd. Part of the issue we're feeling too is that he's getting advice from these experts who have a lot of gatekept knowledge that he was not allowed to have that are trying to solve issues that might crop up in stages 5-8 by laying foundations now and he's functionally having to buy into their absurdity before he can afford it because their assistance is dependent on him executing their experiments. With that in mind, perhaps the issue that you're frustrated with is that the character has functionally been co-opted in his own story? That he's being told to do all this unbelievable stuff en-masse and before he's ready by a bunch of elders that are like "do or die monkey boy" with no real input or chance to develop his own methods except within the framework they've given him? Lack of character agency is pretty tough to see in a story you like after all.

Valderan

I don't feel that I forgot that nor do I see how it invalidates my point. Could you you explain a bit more?

The Tallest Tree

One point I think you're forgetting is they are considered a low tier medium sect due to their combat effectiveness. You're also not considering the fact that no one else is stupid enough to risk their entire cultivation journey to do what the MC is doing and if they did they would probably have died trying (im sure most sects wouldnt be willing to waste the resources like that). If you noticed you'd see aside from advice and tasks the MC is not getting much if anything from the sect. If anything he's giving them a ton of research, a test subject, and materials. The author has been pretty clear that they don't believe he can do it but they're willing to give a modicum of support until he dies or does something too idiotic.

Relken

Hi :D so I personally love our MC story... but him getting the not one but two additional cultivation stuff to do seems EXCESSIVE... like isn't the biggest bottleneck either that you run out of time even though you have thousands of years as a +4stage cultivator or either it's the harmony missing ... like you can't brute force understanding on a subject and because of this can't procced on the subject even with the thousands of years. I love the idea of him being capable in martial combat because of HIS INSANE like... I can't say for sure that his mote count is the highest because we still haven't addressed WHY he can see motes. My personal favourite theory is that he sees them because every baby does but like how every baby sees inverted when they are born in the real world but within days their minds adjust because they figure it out... so I believe it's the same like how everyone sees the motes but to not be driven insane (or whatever) they put in the background. Like for example everyone SHOULD see white squigly lines running in their vision but our BRAIN said .... naaww these stuff aren't important and thus noone sees them ... expect for head injuries or drastic changes in lighting and even then only for a while. so what I'm saying after having gone on this side tangent... It seem our MC is the choosen on that will unite three cultivations... which is just PLAIN stupid like why? Why do it? His chances of successfully clearing stage 5 is almost none existente adleast from a viewers/readers prespective. While having more than 10 times the average mote count... that could be fixed if someone takes those mote pills for birth... like 100 motes daily since birth untill age 5 or so then do the candle and the incense stuff and maybe reaching 50 motes with that and still taking the 100 pills daily... one could REACH immense numbers... so maybe a immortal cultivator's son has the same opportunity (for the math geeks 182 625 for just pushing down the pills... though if I remember correctly you kinda need to pay attention but I'm fairly certain with an energy shield around the child they would stay within them. After the age of five with some heavy coaching if you manage a 150 motes (with pill) daily by the age of 21 you can have an extra 876 600 motes be added to your cultivation... So 182 625 till 5 years old then the childhood motes and in total we have 1 059 225 motes... with a daily 50 ... so our MC having close to two times that number where an immortal dots over their child... it on itself is bunkers... but adding on the fact of having multiple cultivations ... is just bunkers. So in my humble opinion having MC do three cultuivation wings is toooo choosen oney for my taste. Like how Yoda one of the biggest Jedi masters to ever life had a fifth(?) of Anakins midiclorian count. but don't take me wrong MisterVii your a fenomal writer... Maybe when you are explaining the shapes I would really love some visuals :D and I might not be alone on this but besides this cultivation mess the CC, SS is fenomal... though MM is not my cup of tea but sitll noice work there... ESPECIALLY on SS like I'm in love with it. Like it's one of my daily rituals to read them as soon as humanly possible with my messed up schedule. * *****So overral have this takeaway, CC is a bit messy and you seem to have woven yourself into a narrative knot but otherwise the world seem quite intressting, SS is just *click* NOICE, MM no comment not my cup of tea but quite refreshing the first chapter.*****

Ansordia

I feel that you've arbitrarily inflated the worth of his path in terms of resources consumed. You spent so long defining the value of silver and rank 1 spirit stones to then suddenly jump to thousands of rank 3 being cabbage. Or for the Sect Master to make claims and have the mc believe him that his path would consume the entire continent of resources. It cheapens the entire story thus far. Not even in a typical xianxia style frog in well scenario. But in a, that's not how economics works, way. I mean if one low level medium tier sect can figure this stuff out in terms of resource management etc then there'll be others. I mean I think what you're trying to do is basically say "woah iron is so valuable" to then have him go "but I need silver and its worth 10,000 iron" to then be like yeah but apparently I can only use sapphires which the Immortals bathe in which is 10,000,000 gold which is 1000 silver each. Its exhausting and feels completely arbitrary.

The Tallest Tree

Sell the location to a martial sect (or his sect with some elder (the side who is aggresive) go for it) so they go ranksack this beast garden and the ressource into it and kill these two beast

Zarik0

Hmm is Elder Liu Chen’s valve the same thing as a Tesla valve?

Chili


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