The Tarnished Potter Chapter 8 (The Red Chains of Order)
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Comments
I'm glad you liked it. Millicent and Harry will eventually get together; it will be wholesome. The NPC with the letter is Irina, and she is killed by a Misbegotten.
Drinor
2025-03-23 13:42:02 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! Glad Millicent will be more present in the story. Can’t wait to read more of this story. I hope Harry can help other NPCs who got a terrible fate, like the girl who wants us to give a letter to her father (forgot her name).
TheWateringWizard
2025-03-23 07:01:40 +0000 UTCHarry doesn’t have Torrent yet.
Drinor
2025-03-14 05:08:42 +0000 UTCI assume Harry forgot about Torrent, or hasn’t been shown how to summon him? He’d help with traversing the land.
Rogue
2025-03-11 17:39:59 +0000 UTCThank you for pointing it out. I will fix it. It will take a long time until Harry reaches the Haligtree; a lot of things will happen before that.
Drinor
2025-03-09 22:15:42 +0000 UTCInteresting use of Millicent. Looking forward where this will go. And if they make it to the Haligtree. The only issue in this chapter is mentioning Blast-Ended Skrewts. The story started during the events of year 3. Those abominations were introduced in year 4 for the Triwizard Tournament.
Jaroslaw Jarmul
2025-03-09 00:12:48 +0000 UTC
