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Dance of the Dragonwolf Chapter 50 (Even Eyes Can Lie)

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I don't feel bad for the brothers of the faith right now. And honestly I'm disliking viscerys more and more

Eva Cole

I'm glad you like it.

Drinor

Awesome chapter dude!!!!!

SkolldreadWolf00

Alysanne is similar to Olenna, but she's much more ruthless. With what Kinvara has planned. The Faith Militants will soon butcher each other.

Drinor

I love how much in control Alysanne is, made me laugh seeing the flabbergasted Viserys. At least he put Otto in his place! I always love seeing the Red Priest or Priestess tricking the bumbling Faith Militant. Those guys really are tying their own rope around their necks

TheWateringWizard

Don’t worry. I appreciate your help. Thank You for telling me.

Drinor

Okay I’ll put it here, once again please do tell if it’s unwelcome. Also here: "Guards, take him to the black cells. Perhaps confinement will loosen his tongue," Viserys initially ordered I think you meant to write Otto. Sorry to be that guy but I thought giving some quick beta would be helpful. Tell me if it’s not welcome

TheWateringWizard

Let’s hope he learns to stand up to Alicent

Drinor

I’m pretty sure I don’t.

Drinor

When we edit a comment, do you get a new notification or not ?

TheWateringWizard

I just fixed that. Thank you for pointing it out.

Drinor

Just wanted to quickly point out: Viserys nodded as the two sauntered towards their chamber. "You are right, so what would you have me do?" he asked, looking down at Alicent. As they walked toward their chamber, Viserys nodded slowly, absorbing her words. "You’re right, as always. So, what would you have me do?" Viserys repeats himself

TheWateringWizard

Oh, dear Viserys is in the shit it seems.

Daeron Targaryen

That is fair, I am not speaking badly about the want to explore different sources, but his choice of said source He could have asked his grandmother, the dowager Queen, or Lyonel or any other member of the small council Instead he goes to the daughter of the man he is thinking about firing Love the story ❤️

Loyalist

Well, as pointed out in this chapter, he wants advice from different sources. That’s why he opens up to Alicent; he believes he can make better decisions if he is not listening to a single source.

Drinor

A good Holy Brother is a dead one Viserys is truly stupid You seriously expect good and fair council from Alicent Hightower of all people?!?!?!?!?

Loyalist


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