This has been a very delayed commission two years in the making that was entirely my fault. Miscommunication, being unhappy with the sketches I was making to show the client, performance anxiety and eventually stage fright.
After clearing the air with the commissioner, I decided to not let things end on a sour note, and did the sketch they requested (I initially had it as a full colour painting style)
I quite liked how this one turned out! I am rusty when it comes to human weight gain and inflation stuff, but I think these are turning out decently