After-hours 31 p6 up, what's next?
Added 2020-11-07 03:07:07 +0000 UTCleave your ideas below, give a like to those you're ok with.
Time to enter the bone-zone.
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sounds alright! What i will do though is try to keep mugger as obscure as possible, only showing silhouettes or hints of her yummy bits here and there. The charm of the alien movie is after all that the monster itself is rarely seen
Kenno Arkkan
2020-11-09 15:53:19 +0000 UTCA thought just occurred to me: If you go the route I suggested (Mugger sits on Deniz's face to suck him off, then rides him into submission) the climax could be framed as a sort of slasher movie kill moment. You get the shot of Mugger climaxing while riding Deniz and then you get a shot of Deniz's face with Mugger's cum splattering on it akin to blood spatter. I think it would work well as a visual parallel to a kill scene from Alien for the sake of parody giving the impression that Deniz has been killed by the alien when he's just been fucked into submission.
Thomas
2020-11-09 07:32:56 +0000 UTCOh, I mean Mugger is the one being the power bottom. I think we both missed what each other was talking about there. Like my vision for it, at least, would be Mugger intensely riding him until he succumbs to the horny and gets plastered with Mugger jizz.
Thomas
2020-11-08 03:39:53 +0000 UTCOk im confused now. Who are you suggesting to be a power bottom? Xd i might be too tired or there's a language barrier thing going on, cuz i'm lost
Kenno Arkkan
2020-11-08 03:20:50 +0000 UTCI mean the thing with power bottoming is that even though you're on the receiving end you're the one in control. If she's going to be full-on feral and horned up it doesn't quite make sense for her to get into any sort of foreplay instead of just going at it dong-first. Maybe it's her remembering Deniz through the feral horny-haze which is why she takes it instead of outright railing him.
Thomas
2020-11-08 01:33:00 +0000 UTCidk, wouldnt it be strange for a wild feral mugger to allow herself to be power bottomed by a mere dude? :p I'm all about it, but i just dont know how cohesive it is with the argument of the story
Kenno Arkkan
2020-11-07 21:57:04 +0000 UTCThis might just be my personal preference but I feel it might work better if Deniz is 'defeated' by raw power bottoming. Depends on how you feel about him suddenly being able to take full-on Mugger dong from nowhere.
Thomas
2020-11-07 11:26:22 +0000 UTCI like A the most.
PeenusPeepl
2020-11-07 08:19:37 +0000 UTCnext page should be only boning. So i suggest 3 things, as Deniz gets more and more horny and out of control as time progresses: A) Muggs sits on his face (to pin him down) rips his pants and sucks that diiiiiiiick B) She the proceeds to ride that dick C) Last but not least, she rides Deniz ass, by now already going full ahegao, taken by the alien dick.
Kenno Arkkan
2020-11-07 03:09:40 +0000 UTC
