After-hours 31p2 up, what's next?
Added 2020-10-10 00:47:45 +0000 UTCleave your ideas below. everyone has to freak out (maybe try to touch it?) and Muggs will run away spooked into the darkness. What else should we show on next page? who's gonna go after her first? What's the crew's plan?
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yeah save Bagheera for later
Arukath Hellsaint
2020-10-14 20:54:51 +0000 UTCHmm, I think im not gonna introduce bagheera just yet. (at least the likes reflect this as well, so im not breaking any rules here xD ) My reasoning is, if we introduce her right now, does the story -really- have a reason to show us that there's a perfectly normal den upstairs? The conflict is with the engies and has to be resolved within the sci-fi environment to reflect the movie, why would they have to go upstairs at all? Without having to "shoehorn it in" later on with some bad excuse like... idk, bagheera having to go upstairs for a flashlight or something. I think it's far more simple and organic if she listens to the racket -from- upstairs and walks down. Sure, it might add an extra page, but If she shows up downstairs from the getgo, that whole joke/contrast that the engie workshop looks like a gritty scifi spaceship for no logical reason is completely lost, and i think that would be a damn shame and a missed opportunity of a very fun, absurd visual joke.
Kenno Arkkan
2020-10-14 16:28:42 +0000 UTCMaybe it could be like: >Panel of crew grazing at the futadong is shock and awe >Bagheera barges in asking what the racket is >While everybody looks back at her, a shadowy Mugger is already poised on the table >Mugger yeets up into the ceiling as everybody looks up >Raccoon tail disappearing up the vent Then next page could be a minor timeskip as they talk and we set up the first 'victim'
Mr Ru
2020-10-10 20:14:02 +0000 UTCto cut down on panels, you could have Mugger running away right past Bagheera as she walks into the room
MizaruSketch
2020-10-10 12:35:50 +0000 UTCMaybe the first panel could be Bagheera barging in and asking what the commotion is before joining the other crew in looking at the peen. Could be a quick way to intro her.
Mr Ru
2020-10-10 11:31:41 +0000 UTCas a mirror of the original Alien, Mugger would lay there (seemingly unconscious) while her new dick twitches. The crew try to check if Mugger is OK, (they could have fearful/horny looks on their faces) one of them pokes her dong and it sprays cum onto the crew, causing Mugger to leap off the table and scurry away.
MizaruSketch
2020-10-10 07:21:21 +0000 UTCFeels like there's only going to be enough time for the crew all 'varying degrees of want' at the dick and asking mugs if she's alright, before Muggers all [raccoon sounds], is poised on all fours on the table and leaps up to the ceiling. Maybe a final image of her fluffy tail disappearing up a vent.
Mr Ru
2020-10-10 01:49:33 +0000 UTC
