AH22 p4 up, what's next?
Added 2017-05-04 04:23:17 +0000 UTCleave your ideas below. give a like to those you're ok with.
This page was a little oversaturated for my taste x.x might wanna reduce the amount of frames and action happening.
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i just picture Swift's tongue an inch away then the disapointment. heheheheh
Arukath Hellsaint
2017-05-04 23:17:33 +0000 UTCI updated the file on dropbox, thanks!
Kenno Arkkan
2017-05-04 05:21:53 +0000 UTCExcellent B) Just one edit needed on the dialogue of this page: the line where Bravo says "please... squirm me in" is kinda weird. Maybe alter it to "please... make me squirm".
MizaruSketch
2017-05-04 05:16:28 +0000 UTCHow about next page starts with a low angle shot, Bravo is on her back now, Fel is kneeling right above her face, and gives Bravo and the other buns hanging in the back a little twerk. Followed by Fel sitting on Bravo's face, ankles behind her head, and commanding her to eat her ass out, as Bravo continues to feel her thighs and ass, and Fel jerks off. While all this happens, the buns on the back are reaching top hornyness. The lop bunny already feeling and fingering patches as they watch. Swift goes ahead and says "Alright, I guess it's time to fuck like bunnies!". They assume when they hired Fel it included them too. And as she approaches Fel's dick, tongue first, Fel gently stops her with her index finger. "Ah-ah, you can't have any of this. You hired me exclusively to entertain my best girl Bravo here. " "whaaaat!?" the other three buns, already half naked and wet would scream in disbelief. Of course, next page after that, we introduce Fel's entourage of Pawsy and Trace waiting outside.
Kenno Arkkan
2017-05-04 04:38:40 +0000 UTC
