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MLWF: after hours 3 p5!

Ok! Al is about to get tested. How? How is he going to fail? I want to answer both questions in next page :O or 2 if much. My suggestion would be having Alex asking him some questions like who is he and how did he ended in the island, and explaining that she's going to test him to see if he's fit for the tribe n stuff, while teasing him someway. :O then maybe when she pushes him to the bed and starts grinding on his junk, that's when he cums and she calls the guards and he's taken to the dungeons! Leave your suggestions below!

MLWF: after hours 3 p5!

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whoops, sorry. uhm, put in order then I suppose. also, I imagine Alex going through these tests with a clipboard in hand making little red x's on all the areas he comes up short. Maybe like grinding on him to get him hard and then "measuring" his size with her butt (ruler print on panties?). Then a handjob for stamina and saying something like, "Hmm, subject came too quickly." Maybe she catches his splooge in a vial and is unimpressed by the quantity. And then strips and poses with a stopwatch to test his recovery. I could see Alex calling in the guard to take Al away and shaking her head despondently while he's being led off, and then noticing an unusual birthmark on his ass/back that corresponds to "ancient prophecy" or something.

Dragon tooth

Well, I believe that Alex would be the sort to slap Al's balls in retaliation once he accidentally cums on her face; she seems the sort to be corrupt by a position of authority!

MaveriKat

Ah. I guess I didn't see the votes. Ah well.

MaveriKat

everybody is explaining the whole plot for the comic! I need specifics! =O -what are they doing specificly-? what do you want to see until Al fails? :O otherwise i will only do whatever the hell i want xDD

Kenno Arkkan

D: but you got some incidents out of order, he fails with alex > goes to prison > about to be executed, gets the quest to retrieve the vial.

Kenno Arkkan

alex won by popular vote =O

Kenno Arkkan

I like the idea of having low endurance as the failure. That way she is displeased with his "performance" and sends him off. As for testing him I think anything works. Once he fails in pleasing her he should be taken away and maybe she has him wait somewhere/dungeon/wherever while she makes a brew to get him to last longer. Or have him go around learning the way of the tribe (sex acts) through a lesson from each hybrid. Maybe followed by the potion being made? In which case they all get a shot at him and maybe another orgy like last comic. :0 I'm kind of getting ahead of the page though..

Hmm... I thought Fel was gonna be the Chieftan. Ah well, what you have planned works.

MaveriKat

maybe Al just falls short in endurance by cumming too quickly, doesn't quite meet enough of the tribe members' desired size, has too much down time between boners, and doesn't produce enough semen. Perhaps as a contrast Al is really good at giving oral and fingering? I'd kind of like to see someone letting Al out of a dungeon cell via a secret tunnel on the condition that she gets to be the first to test his new found abilities after getting the potion of infinite bonerrage or whatever it's going to be called.

Dragon tooth

Let's move this along by going straight from cumming in alex's face to being sent to retrieve the mysterious artifact at the top of the volcano. after he fails at pleasing her she could offer him another chance if he retrieves the magic boner potion

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