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page 4 of after hours 3 up! An idea i came up with!

Ok, I came up with a big idea for this story. I'll just leave it here and i want to hear what you think about it :O Ok, the chieftain should be a futa girl, anyone (But i would suggest either Fel or Alex, I would pick Fel because cats but up to you). Why? Well, here goes the story: The hybrids living in the island are "cursed" people. They can't give birth to males. something messed up with their genetics, or something. So what they've been doing is taking castaways and using them to sustain their population. Where do all these castaways come from you ask? Well, turns out this unknown island not found in any map (I thought of this story situated in a XVIII-XIX century era, think of tarzan; so no satellites or google maps shit yet) is in the bermuda triangle D: !! So sailors usually get lost in there and end in this island: But there is a trace of male genes in their dna pool from ancient times, so every once in a while, a dickgirl is born, and by their tradition, these unique girls are destined to rule the tribe! But yet, this dickgirls remain sterile. Ok, so this tribe, at first, found every castaway and deliberately offered themselves to breed with them. But the dudes that ended on the island weren't always chill dudes! Once a whole crew of sailors with a crate of weaponry ended on the island, and after finding the tribe, decided to enslave them D:! But after a bloody mutiny, and the cost of many hybrid's lives, they could take them down with their superhuman strength! yay! But this made the hybrids recentful against human men :( so they started being a lot more careful and xenophobic about them, till the point where they are "killed on sight" if the population was big enough, or they were seen as a threat. So every once in awhile, they found a proper male specimen, and any hybrid willing to have children would then "take the seed" from them ;) so you can imagine they would either die of snusnu, or just excecuted after they ran out of breeding volunteers, or they would flee (but then again they're on the bermuda triangle so trying to escape the island = failure), or perhaps even stay with them (which we will assume it hasn't happened? maybe not? Al could find an elder dude that arrived to that island long ago maybe!). Now back to the chieftain, her duty would be, aside from being the leader of the tribe, to test all the male subjects to see if they had "what the hybrid tribe deserve!" (gene-wise of course!) Since she was a futa (a kenno futa that is) she's unable to get pregnant, making her the perfect one for the job. So, back to our story, our hero would arrive to the village in the middle of a fertility and harvest festival, something rather common every time the harvest season comes. The festival lasts a week, and all the hybrids celebrate the abundance with big dinner parties, flashy attires with the island's most exotic materials, and of course, late night orgies at the chief's hut ;) After arriving, he would be immediatly presented to the chieftain, who would then proceed to "test" him, he would fail D: and then the chieftain would order his execution! but then someone would come up, maybe monica the witchdoctor, and she would be like "Wait! Don't you see?? The prophecy says "On the second day of the harvest festival, a lone, young, horned hero would arrive (making allusion to his hair antena :P) to the tribe, to bring abundance and peace for a hundred years to come!" and everyone would stare at his antenna like " O.o she's right! " That's when the chieftain then decides to let him prove his worth, by retrieving the vial of unending boners from atop of the volcano, "defeating" the 4 priestesses of the volcano on the shrines on its way up, and bringing back the vial victoriously. Only then his life would be spared! I have a small story for the vial too! It could be something a previous castaway, a doctor perhaps, left before trying to flee. Unaware of what this was, the chieftain drink a little of it, giving her an UNENDING ERECTION! In her desperation she fucked the whole tribe TWICE! before the erection ceased. Seeing this substance as dangerous, it was sealed away at the shrine atop of the volcano! And that's what our hero has to retrieve! (you can imagine what's going to happen when he does get it!) So yeah, that's roughly what I would like the story to be. For next page i would have him being presented to the chief, and be invited inside her hut. I also vote Fel for chieftain because cats. What's your decision?

page 4 of after hours 3 up! An idea i came up with!

Comments

story is good move in the right direction and i cast my vote to alex as chieftan fel can be like her royal protector or guard

AzuraDio

Alex is my vote for chieftan. I like the story you have planned out!

Garrett

I vote Alex for the leader, as she is a bit power hungry and that would allow us the possibility of Fel and Al babies...i'll bet the look like Pawsy.

Paul Gabbard

that's a lot of backstory! I'll vote for fel.. and buttsex

Slikfiji

I'm for Alex as she is normally a power player. Fel, I think, would be one of the Four to beat.

bracabrad

who's your chief of choice?

Kenno Arkkan

Actually it's something of a relief to see you and I were thinking very much along the same vein, boss man. It saves me the trouble of having to coerce the story in that direction with every page update. Naturally I have a few things I'm still going to add or attempt to push along because, well...cheeseburgers. Let's say cheeseburgers. I only insist on Alex still being the chief for one very good reason (which I'll get to, haha, so bear with me); Al should be put on a challenge, like you suggested, and part of the challenge is not being allowed to cum, at all, after his pitiful first display in her hut. So he has to take on his four challenges; each one designed to take on a facet of sexual ability and failure equals death. Succeeding, however, is paid in the form of one of the ingredients needed to concoct the potion he'll eventually be consuming. As for Alex as the chief, well...the reason I'm leading towards is one of the challenges is subduing the mighty futa Fel...because cats. Then there's an orgy, sexsplosion, messes everywhere. Good times.

Yep. I like it. Go for it Kenno!

Dragon tooth

This is going to be an awesome story, Also, I stand by your decision and vote Fel as Chieftan. Because: Cats.

MaveriKat


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