Chapter 1921
Added 2021-11-20 22:49:44 +0000 UTCComments
Thanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2021-11-22 06:56:51 +0000 UTCthe connection between and Delilah > the connection between him and Delilah
Nicholas F
2021-11-21 14:12:06 +0000 UTCDoubt > doubted
2021-11-21 07:33:14 +0000 UTCI read a present tense novel right before writing. It def messes me up
PuDDleS4263
2021-11-21 05:17:29 +0000 UTCWhen RG "comes back to his body" from the Sea of Dreams, wasn't the Sea of Dreams on the dark side of the moon? Was he astrally projecting?
Gardor
2021-11-21 05:16:17 +0000 UTCThere were a lot of incorrect tenses (i.e. “is/has” when it should be “was/had”) in these last two chapters
David C
2021-11-21 03:27:24 +0000 UTCthrough a ropes course -through a rope course
Chris
2021-11-20 23:54:44 +0000 UTCtired of tacking their-tired of taking their
Chris
2021-11-20 23:42:08 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapters
nethernight11
2021-11-20 23:41:27 +0000 UTCThe ending ... pulled heartstrings
Darune Albane
2021-11-20 23:13:29 +0000 UTCCorrections
PuDDleS4263
2021-11-20 22:49:58 +0000 UTC
