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Chapter 1886

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I hope your wrist feels better puddles.

EnigmaticOne

I think it was based on nether. Using nether directly is probably way more effective.

SunderGoldmane

By the power of friendship!

SunderGoldmane

Thanks for the chapter

nethernight11

Why is it that Rand never uses his “erode image” skill in fights like this? It feels like a massively underutilized tool

David C

I just realized it. Devick is just Ystrix all over again. But this time, a lot more vicious. The overbearing yet compassionate mother figure of Ystrix, who does stuff the child hates but it's all in some way for his own good. And now, the dark and self-centered mother figure of Devick who likes the idea of having a child, but is thinking of herself rather than the child's wellbeing and is continuously doing said child harm due to her selfish whims.

Jemini

This battle feels very rushed. The amount of twists and turns covered in the past chapters feel like they could use twice the amount of time to make it feel more grounded; the fact that there are multiple POV shifts to keep things making sense I think is indicative of the pace being too fast.

Krazy Kanaka

I dont know but for me this was probably the worst chapter since maybe the early ones.

JF

Thanks for the chapter

BlackRazaras

Corrections

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