Mini Comic Question
Added 2016-12-21 01:31:35 +0000 UTCSo, this month's mini comic is 4 pages (next month's will definately by 3)! I'd like your thoughts on the rough sketch version of the comic. We still have some placeholder text (Safi's last line will be replaced with.. somthing.. I've been playing around with some options), and the dialog in general is still being tweaked and such. Some expressions will be changed as well, etc. It's rough!
Anyway, sketches are attatched!
Comments
Awesome comic sketches!
veeshan123
2016-12-21 02:02:09 +0000 UTCSome contenders for last line: > "how.. limbs first? #$@!, [i]that's[/i] my.. last.. thoug-?" > "Getting..hard...t-to.. think.." > "So.. warm.." > "I...I... ..." (Text getting smaller near end) ---- I also want to insert a reminder that, in this alt-cannon situation, all of their powers have somehow been suppressed, but lack a good spot to put it. Maybe replace the page 2 swear bit with Katoka taunting Safi..? Hrm... yeah, that might work..
GrimFC
2016-12-21 01:46:50 +0000 UTC
