Arc III - Chapter 1 (Chapter 66)
Added 2022-08-13 09:09:11 +0000 UTCHello All, please see the first chapter of Arc III, one that kicks off the final saga in this story.
This Arc will be far less combative and will involve a lot more intrigue than in the previous arcs which will present its own challenges writing wise.
It will also be truer to the world building elements in the literal sense as Illos and the universe at large is slowly revealed to you guys and there will be more science fiction involved in this Arc along with philosophical questions and moral decisions that may or may not be right (or wrong).
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Not quite immortal. Extremely long lived but can die from a wound
Mosef
2022-08-22 18:10:19 +0000 UTCIt's Amelie Cantona, as hybrid vampire, immortal?
pedr5ke
2022-08-22 10:32:12 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! Sounds like there is going to be a cold war in the Wizarding world with ICW and affiliates on one side and Illos, MACUSA, Japan, France and Ireland on the other side. I look forward to seeing how that all unfolds.
Robo
2022-08-17 14:19:38 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter. Per normal you left me anxious for the next installment
Eric
2022-08-15 17:57:33 +0000 UTCI would like to read the confrontation between Atticus and ICW, I can smell badassery here!
Jones
2022-08-15 12:08:15 +0000 UTCOmake or short chapter series would be pretty goid
Gilgamos
2022-08-15 12:08:05 +0000 UTCA small omake would be a nice read
Jones
2022-08-15 12:06:19 +0000 UTCNot the most trusted but most certainly the ones easily converted into becoming loyal. There is a reason why most that left were hedge witches/wizards and poor purebloods at the fringes of society. They were effectively already cut off from main society and as such presented an opportunity to bind them to him. These magicals are not exactly the cream of the crop magically speaking but loyalty matters the most and these people had been easy to win over
Mosef
2022-08-13 20:01:13 +0000 UTCI might have alluded to it but I think that will be a short spin off at best. It opens a can of worms that I'm not sure I want to make canon to the story. Dimensional travel opens up a lot of possibilities but it also can shift the story away from where it is meant to go. I could do an Omake esque spin off if people really want to see it though.
Mosef
2022-08-13 19:57:24 +0000 UTCBut didn't approximately 10% of the UK leave with him? That doesn't sound like only the most trusted and i assume veelas that were saved from slavery would be loyal
Randydandy
2022-08-13 19:13:43 +0000 UTCIn the future you reckon that mc and Emily will end up in cannon universe for awhile?
Gilgamos
2022-08-13 16:33:00 +0000 UTCThe same reason why most people aren't invited. They aren't too different from other purebloods. Illos needs solid foundations first, it is likely why the main population are close allies, muggleborns and the like, and some purebloods who have sworn an oath to Atticus, as well as a bunch of orphans. You can see that nobody else is really there yet. Even the older people are already amazed at the young kids being so different to what they know, if you introduce more of an older population like Veela you lose the power to shape the society into what you want. I'm guessing Veela and the rest going to be allowed in soon, in a smaller number year by year.
Dull Pen
2022-08-13 15:35:45 +0000 UTCWith the veelas we saw here I'm a bit confused that they were not invited to Illos yet. It would be nice if we see an explanation for that later
Randydandy
2022-08-13 14:45:43 +0000 UTCEdits.. many dormants are exceeding should be excelling.
Harkin
2022-08-13 13:55:09 +0000 UTC*insert surprised pikachu face* …. *insert satisfied seal meme*
Dull Pen
2022-08-13 11:01:00 +0000 UTCThanks for the read!
Tyler Brain
2022-08-13 09:13:43 +0000 UTC