Smoking Hypnosis Behind Story EP.1
Added 2023-11-03 14:50:23 +0000 UTCThank you for waiting! I hope you enjoyed the my comic. A new character Rin, will appear in the next episode. Please be looking forward for it! 기다려주셔서 감사합니다! 준비한 만화가 충분히 만족스러우셨으면 좋겠어요. 새로운 캐릭터인 '유현정'은 다음 화부터 등장할 예정입니다. 기대해주세요! 感谢您的耐心等待！ 希望您能喜欢这部漫画。 新角色“柳炫贞”将在下一集登场。 敬请期待 ! お待たせしました！ありがとうございました！ 私が用意した漫画が不足していないことを願っています。 次回は新キャラクターのリンが登場する予定です。 お楽しみにお待ちください !
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对不起！ 我现在才看到你的评论。我的下载没有问题。 我不知道是什么原因造成的。 如果还是下载不了，我可以直接发给你。
Dr. Stein
2023-12-21 05:48:11 +0000 UTC为什么下载失败?
LINKCc
2023-12-18 06:27:08 +0000 UTCWould love to see it! Seeing moral decline and a good girl turning into a smoking whore is so hot. Thank you for replying! Will always support.
Sebby L
2023-11-16 17:34:35 +0000 UTCThank you so much for praising my comic. Unfortunately, I don't think there will be many scenes in this series depicting how addicted she is to smoking. Her moral decline and memory distortion will be the main storyline. There will be plenty of scenes of her smoking though.
Dr. Stein
2023-11-15 09:45:07 +0000 UTCAmazing work! This is the best comic I've seen this year, and the way she smokes always turns me on. Wish there are some details to show how addicted she is to smoking. Maybe that's included in future episodes? One episode per month is a long wait, hope it's shorter so we can see how deep she falls into eventually. Wouldn't mind pay 10x subcription fee to see them faster. Great work and please keep the scratches and updates going! Much love!
Sebby L
2023-11-14 07:24:27 +0000 UTCThanks for your understanding! I appreciate your support and will do My best to improve the quality of My work.
Dr. Stein
2023-11-08 23:05:33 +0000 UTC@Kallisto Thank you so much for understanding my position. I'm trying to figure out how to operate Twitter, as it doesn't fit the webtoon format. I'm open to the idea of running Patreon or Gumroad.
Dr. Stein
2023-11-08 23:02:07 +0000 UTC나는 당신의 뜻을 이해합니다. 나도 주변의 친구들에게이 우수한 작품을 추천하려고 노력하고있으며 그들이 작가를 더 많이 지지해주기를 바랍니다.현재 우리 전체 서방사회는 여성에 대해 여전히 약자집단이라고 생각하고, 남성은 선천적으로 여성을 보호해야 한다고 생각한다.이 작품은 여성의 타락을 다루고 있다. 내 주위의 친구들은 이에 대해 별로 관심이 없다고 한다.혼자서는 안 된다고 생각할 정도로 일본계를 선호한다.나는 진심으로 작가가 건강하기를 바란다. 나는 다만 작가가 더욱 우수한 작품을 만들어 내기를 바랄 뿐이다.나는 예전과 같이 저자에게 지지를 표하며 그가 점점 더 좋아지기를 바란다.나는 다만 독자의 립장에서 문제를 고려했을뿐이며 이런 나의 눈길을 끄는 만화를 마주하면 감정을 억누르지 못하였다.진심으로 더 많이 기대해본다.죄송 합니다
Margarita Fleck
2023-11-08 02:37:44 +0000 UTC외국에서도 지금 남녀권리의 대립이 극성을 부린다. 비록 내가 주먹질을 할 생각은 없지만 그렇다고 해서 지금의 남성들의 처지를 바꾸지는 못한다. 당신의 작품을 보면 어쩔수 없는 현실에 대한 일종의 발산이다. 또한 당신이 자신을 보호하길 바란다.
Margarita Fleck
2023-11-08 02:31:10 +0000 UTC나는 당신을 이해하고, 또한 당신에게 나에게이 아주 훌륭한 작품을 줘서 감사를 표시하고, 당신이 좀 더 애매한 줄거리를 만들 수 있기를 바랍니다.더 좋은 작품도 기대하며, 항상 응원하겠습니다
Margarita Fleck
2023-11-08 02:28:48 +0000 UTC@Margarita The Internet (instant access to data and services) seems to have made us impatient and sometimes greedy. As Dr. Stein wrote, he is one person with no staff or helpers behind him. And it takes a lot of time to produce quality graphics. I myself would have liked to see more frequent updates, but the reality is different and we have to understand that. Besides, even if you like what you're doing, it's easy to burn out if you work more than you can handle. Not to mention the increased risk of developing conditions such as carpal tunnel syndrome. I can only suggest that you promote Dr. Stein's work at every opportunity (Twitter etc.). An increase in subscribers brings more income, and that may one day lead to the possibility of hiring help.
Kallisto
2023-11-07 22:31:33 +0000 UTCAs I said, "behind story" is a six-part series. Season 2 is yet to be determined. It may be longer than season one, with more characters than season one.
Dr. Stein
2023-11-07 14:03:47 +0000 UTC励ましありがとうございます もっと頑張ります!
Dr. Stein
2023-11-07 14:00:50 +0000 UTC알겠습니다. 시간이 있을 때 정리해서 한꺼번에 올리겠습니다! 고맙습니다!
Dr. Stein
2023-11-07 14:00:18 +0000 UTC虽然这个角色是我创造的，但有时我也会对他产生同情。
Dr. Stein
2023-11-07 13:58:33 +0000 UTCWebtoonists on the platform have several assistants. There are also writers who write scripts. They mostly work in teams. I'm doing everything by myself. The writing, the content, the sketches, the coloring, the initial translation. I understand what you mean about wanting to see more than you do now. But I'm also spending most of my time working on this work. I'd say that my current output is the best I can do. I'd appreciate your understanding.
Dr. Stein
2023-11-07 13:57:38 +0000 UTC나는 당신의 화풍을 지지한다. 나는 당신의 화풍을 매우 좋아한다고 생각한다. 하지만 나의 개인적인 조언을 해준다. 56페이지는 보기에 부족하다. 나도 다른 한국 만화의 대부분이 있는 100페이지가 넘는 말을 보고 있다. 나는 당신이 그랬으면 좋겠다. 당신의 화풍과 전체적인 스타일이 마음에 든다. 나는 이 만화를 좋아하지 않으면 몇 마디만 있으면 끝난다. 국내에서는 이런 소재가 너무 다른 플랫폼에서도 당신의 만화를 발표하여 더 많은 사람들이 당신의 우수성을 볼 수 있기를 바랍니다. 화이팅, 늘 그렇듯이
Margarita Fleck
2023-11-07 12:20:39 +0000 UTC很喜欢这个题材，但是非常讨厌信友这个角色！总之还是好评！
CC B
2023-11-06 06:39:54 +0000 UTC1: Thanks for the explanation. It's a nice idea. 2: Yeah, it's probably complicated from a graphic standpoint (multiple characters at once), but maybe you could extend it in a mini spin-off series about it (1-2 chapters?), after foreshadowing it in season 2? I don't know, it's up to you of course, but I'll look forward to it.
Kallisto
2023-11-06 00:55:22 +0000 UTCyou're right you said 6 episodes originally, you called it 7.5 a lot so I think thats why I had 7 in my head
Kollie
2023-11-05 23:21:10 +0000 UTC드디어 팬박스네요. 기다리고 있었습니다. 스토리가 진행될수록 더 천박해질 서연이의 모습이 기대가 되네요. 괜찮으시다면 이전 시리즈들을 모아서 팬박스에서 이런식으로 다운받아 볼 수 있으면 좋을 것 같아요. 더 좋은 작품 기대하겠습니다.
Sieghart
2023-11-05 19:38:11 +0000 UTC기억해주시니 감사할 따름입니다 후원과 응원으로 보답하겠습니다...!
gh di
2023-11-05 13:19:35 +0000 UTCDear Dr.Stein,I am curious to inquire with you about how many episodes of the main plot of the story will be in your plan, as either too long or too short a story length may affect the good impression of the final work on audience
Francis
2023-11-05 11:18:08 +0000 UTCストーリーの続きを待っていました！Dr.Steinさんの描く漫画が大好きです。 少し遅れましたがFANBOXのオープンおめでとうございます！
A-Pack
2023-11-05 04:36:21 +0000 UTCDid I write that? My English isn't great, so I may have made a mistake that I didn't realize. But behind story is actually six episodes.
Dr. Stein
2023-11-05 04:09:04 +0000 UTC1. The woman in episode 5 is an extra and has nothing to do with hypnosis. However, many readers seem to like this character. I'm thinking about bringing her back as a member of the drug cartel. 2. I want to draw a gangbang, but I think it would take too long. However, it will probably appear once in season 2. Even if it takes a long time, it's a necessary scene for the scenario.
Dr. Stein
2023-11-05 04:05:05 +0000 UTC是的。 柳炫贞對陈瑞妍同時擁有友情和憎惡的感情。 目標是像自己一樣墮落。
Dr. Stein
2023-11-05 03:59:43 +0000 UTCThank you! Stay tuned for the next chapter!
Dr. Stein
2023-11-05 03:55:24 +0000 UTC谢谢！
Dr. Stein
2023-11-05 03:44:52 +0000 UTC感谢您的好评！
Dr. Stein
2023-11-05 03:44:30 +0000 UTC반갑습니다! 댓글을 자주 달아주셔서 기억하고 있어요!
Dr. Stein
2023-11-05 03:43:29 +0000 UTC제 애니메이션을 만들어주시는 머또스튜디오에서 11월엔 진행이 어렵다고 합니다. 연말이나 월초부터 작업이 가능하다고 하셨어요.
Dr. Stein
2023-11-05 03:42:45 +0000 UTC柳炫貞那種惡女的表情很棒，不知道她會不會重新產生友誼，原本是想著報復的，但是兩人一起在做壞事的時候找回了往日當朋友的感覺，潛意識裡不知不覺又把女主角當做朋友看待，只有兩人都在做壞事時才能重新成為朋友，因此她非常不願意女主角變回頑固的人格
VOQ
2023-11-05 00:41:26 +0000 UTCAs for other suggestions, I would recommend setting up a Twitter account for promotional purposes (links to profiles) with posts promoting new episodes (but I wouldn't post as many graphics as on Pixiv). I would also set up sister accounts on sites like Patreon and SubscribeStar to reach a wider audience, especially in the West (Fanbox is not very well known). By the way, I re-read the earlier episodes. And I have to say that the girl smoking a cigarette in episode 5 (the scene in the restaurant) has a really great design when it comes to clothes (she's cool on her own, too). I also noticed that her eyes are tinted pink/red, is that a coincidence or does it mean that she is also under hypnosis?
Kallisto
2023-11-04 17:36:29 +0000 UTCI know you listen to fan comments (thank you), but it is not always possible to implement them, because they would conflict with the story being told, etc. For example I'd like to see Mia having sex with several people at the same time (gangbang), and I'm not sure whether that is even possible in the story or its spin-offs like the "Behind-story". So a separate, not directly related graphic would fulfil that fantasy and not directly interfere with the story. Mia as a blonde is great, and the change in hair colour emphasises her metamorphosis, so I wouldn't give that up.
Kallisto
2023-11-04 17:35:53 +0000 UTCSorry, English is not my first language either. I may have been unclear. What I meant was not priority access, but the possibility of having the scene drawn according to the guidelines given by the backer. But now that I think about it, this idea is wrong, for it to make sense, the price would have to be really high, so that it would mainly be a maximum of 2 people per month, otherwise you would mainly spend your time drawing these scenes and not the comic itself. The poll option is better. You choose the themes and the backers vote on which theme wins. If thresholds were introduced, you could weight the votes according to the threshold. Let's say such a vote took place once a month.
Kallisto
2023-11-04 17:35:00 +0000 UTC애니메이션 4화도 만들어주실 수 있나요?!
민우뽑기2
2023-11-04 16:19:32 +0000 UTCCan't wait for next month to read the next chapter, this chapter is a good start!
kakakakak
2023-11-04 15:33:32 +0000 UTC真的很不错，从第一章看过来的，很棒！
敏行 王
2023-11-04 15:18:27 +0000 UTC感谢这么好的创作
涡轮
2023-11-04 15:02:55 +0000 UTCis behind story going to be 6 episodes? I thought you said said 7 during the last announcment, did it get lowered or do you mean theres 6 episodes left?
Kollie
2023-11-04 13:28:15 +0000 UTC팬박스에서 보니 감회가 새롭네요 드릴 수 있는건 후원뿐이지만... 잘 보고 있습니다!
gh di
2023-11-04 12:17:27 +0000 UTC😍
Dr. Stein
2023-11-04 05:01:11 +0000 UTCThanks for the suggestion! I don't speak English very well, so I didn't fully understand the first suggestion. Are you suggesting that people who have paid extra should be given priority in releasing uncolored paintings or sketches? I may change my mind in the future, but for now I'd like to keep the existing membership system. However, like you said, we could try a poll to decide the outfit. Also, you can always make suggestions regarding the direction of the artwork or the costumes of the characters. I may not take them all, but I do try to take them into account. I prefer blonde Mia,too. Personally, I think blonde Mia is much hotter and more attractive :)
Dr. Stein
2023-11-04 05:00:29 +0000 UTCAs always, thanks for your interest!
Dr. Stein
2023-11-04 04:22:23 +0000 UTC我也喜欢！ 谢谢你的创意！
Dr. Stein
2023-11-04 04:21:36 +0000 UTCThat's all I do now, except for the occasional outsourced project. However, due to my desire for quality and the speed of my work, I'm sorry to say that I can only show you one a month. Season 2 will be released after 6 episodes of "Behind story".
Dr. Stein
2023-11-04 04:20:35 +0000 UTCThank you for your positive review. This series will be about Mia's self and her memories.
Dr. Stein
2023-11-04 04:14:17 +0000 UTC다음달 4일 정도에 발매될 예정입니다. 나중에 정식으로 공지하겠습니다!
Dr. Stein
2023-11-04 04:09:21 +0000 UTC고맙습니다!
Dr. Stein
2023-11-04 04:08:47 +0000 UTC감사합니다! 계속 좋은 작품 그리도록 노력하겠습니다!
Dr. Stein
2023-11-04 04:08:29 +0000 UTC기다렸습니다. 정말 잘 봤습니다. 앞으로도 기대하겠습니다. 계속 좋은 작업 되시길 바랄게요.
트이나리
2023-11-04 03:42:34 +0000 UTCAnother great episode as always, thank you! As others have mentioned, I really like that we get to know Mia's thoughts. The video theme is also a plus, makes the whole situation plausible. One would like to hibernate for these few months or pay for the remaining episodes in advance, but one can't have everything. It's just a shame that I'll have to wait at least 7 months (the end of the current story + at least 1 episode of the second season) to see Mia with pierced nipples and a tattoo ;-) Have you thought about adding more support thresholds in the future? For example, there could be a high one (e.g. 5000+ yen) where you could be asked to draw a graphic with a character from the series in a simplified version (line art or simple colouring). Alternatively, higher thresholds would give you the right to vote for one of the suggested motifs, which would be chosen by a vote and realised as an additional graphic (e.g. Rin, Mia and her sister in sexy lingerie, high heels together).
Kallisto
2023-11-03 22:01:17 +0000 UTCI feel the same way. Many comics neglect to show the thoughts of the female characters or limit them to single words, which I think is a mistake that reduces the immersion.
Kallisto
2023-11-03 21:38:59 +0000 UTCBehind story only. Dr. Stein is a man with a day job, so he draws after hours (probably), and given the high quality of the art, it is unrealistic to expect two comics a month.
Kallisto
2023-11-03 21:28:35 +0000 UTCGreat work.
obviousagent
2023-11-03 20:40:50 +0000 UTC혹시 다음화는 언제 나오는지 알 수 있을까요?
doc jay
2023-11-03 16:16:37 +0000 UTC这件白色的小背心莫名的好看，比全裸更能勾起我的欲望，太色了。
XK君
2023-11-03 15:34:12 +0000 UTCWill both the behind story and the normal storyline be updated every month ,or just updated the behind story firstly in the future?
Francis
2023-11-03 15:32:48 +0000 UTC다음편이 기대 되네요 항상 잘 보고 있습니다.
쏘댕이
2023-11-03 15:07:02 +0000 UTCReally good. Loved seeing her inner thoughts while losing control and the video as a manipulation tactic. Has me even more excited for what Rin is gonna do to her
Kollie
2023-11-03 15:06:07 +0000 UTC☺️😆
Windhover
2023-11-03 15:02:17 +0000 UTC
