Contest entry near by
Added 2024-03-27 22:29:46 +0000 UTCI got some feedback that my story is a bit of an info dump and a bit fast passed. Especially in the beginning. I agree, there are many places I would love to flesh it out more. I don't have time to ink and color it all, but since I'm delivering a over 200 pages manuscript, where over half is colored, I think I can leave some of the sketch pages in it. After all, I need to redo stuff in the beginning anyway. The reason for the original fast pace was that I drew it for Deviantart, and I dropped a page now and then, so a fast pace was kinda the thing.
