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Added 2022-05-13 20:43:58 +0000 UTCNot super satisfied with the visuals on this one-- text feels a little too small, composition isn't great, and the colors are all muddled. Doesn't *pop* like it should. Learning to work in a more visually dense style like this will necessitate some growing pains ( compared to say, bad enders, which was essentially all white and background-less). I will probably be trying out some different compositional techniques going forward. Expect my tree-drawing abilities to improve, too.
Comments
Bullshit, the Calbain reveal facial expression is tops
Martynas Klimas
2022-05-15 05:30:06 +0000 UTCthey are from the april comic, that was the first time they've appeared
Beany Tuesday
2022-05-14 22:38:37 +0000 UTCInsert slowpoke meme, but these are the characters from the April comic? Have they appeared before then? I feel like an unsupportive fan but my memory is shit
petrichor
2022-05-13 23:41:19 +0000 UTCI’m really excited for this one! Even if you arent happy with the visuals yet, I’m really invested in this story already!
Emily Ree
2022-05-13 21:06:23 +0000 UTC
