Hot Tub Love Machine - 10
Added 2021-01-18 21:00:03 +0000 UTCHi, if you're not up to date on Hot Tub Love Machine, read the previous chapters here:
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Glad you liked it!
Neal Johnstone
2021-01-25 19:51:24 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter. Ray has been more willing to play along than it seemed. So good for her reconciling and all. Boring movie the didn’t seem to get a fair shake. But we the audience appreciate the sexy things instead. No mater how you look at it, sexy things among friends is a hard line to walk without breaking anyone’s personal hard no. Well Dawn, I’m rooting for you for what its worth.
HardhatDoozer
2021-01-25 13:57:17 +0000 UTCYes he is referring to his mother giving him the love potion on top of just commenting that their beach towels are covered with stinging jellyfish and biting sharks. Fun at the beach. extraneous comma deleted
Neal Johnstone
2021-01-19 02:48:03 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, as always. Question; when Lucas thinks "What was wrong with, Mom?" is he asking what is wrong with his mother for giving him date rape drugs or is there a dropped/implied word there?
2021-01-19 02:00:16 +0000 UTCI hope that's a good goggled expression. I do love goggling.
Neal Johnstone
2021-01-19 00:51:22 +0000 UTCO_o
Tenpoundtarantula
2021-01-18 21:57:08 +0000 UTC
