Hot Tub Love Machine - Chapter 3
Added 2020-10-13 01:54:28 +0000 UTCIf you missed the first two chapters of Hot Tub Love Machine, read them here:
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1GWUWRgDI1Zh7bnb4EJMgnRKvgdafJoRd?usp=sharing
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Comments
Excellent, I really like how Anna lights up in a blush but is still an instigator. It makes her feel braver than she is, though she is brave.
Neal Johnstone
2020-10-14 23:42:48 +0000 UTCLast chapter I was concerned that Anna wasn’t going to play along. But despite the efforts of Emi and especially Iggy, I still feel that Anna stole the scene. I’m sure Dawn will be jealous when she figures it out.
HardhatDoozer
2020-10-14 15:42:19 +0000 UTCYes, I put a link to the start of every story, to the index (folder), and to the next chapter at the bottom of each chapter. If someone's new they can easily get started, if someone's missed a few chapters they can get straight to the folder, and of course once the story's up a reader can make their way through easily. Would a link to the previous chapter also be good? In case someone just missed the last update?
Neal Johnstone
2020-10-13 13:10:28 +0000 UTC
