(Comic) Pink World - Page 15
Added 2021-12-23 21:58:05 +0000 UTCFluttershy Always Horny Trait = Unlocked
Spike's First Creampie = Unlocked
Progress will still be slow due to holidays and upcoming rewards next month. But slow and steady wins the race, and won't be taking any commissions until this comic is done.
As always, poll will be up a bit later.
Comments
As ever, take the time you need, you got the money for this and it'll come out when it comes out. Now, as for the piece itself, I'd say the paneling work here is really good. 12 panels of different shapes and sizes that depict just what they're aiming to do for each of them, allowing the more stand-out panels more space to breath for themselves. Seeing how far the characters have come and knowing how much you've hinted they still have to go is exciting, as it means a lot more of a burning transformation for each of them, while having left these 15 pages to be quite satisfying as a start. The fourth panel and the eighth panel are interesting as mirrors because the between the two of them it feels like the pose and posturing was slightly better done on the eighth panel; The motion in the fourth doesn't quite convey Spike just randomly slamming his hands on random spots on her (as one might expect where his hands ended up; some fingers on her back, her waist, her hips, her ass, just kind of everywhere) because the motion and body language doesn't feel super-frantic. On the other hand his hands aren't positioned in such a way that it feels like it's directly interacting and grabbing Twi, as it is in panel eight. Comparing the two directly, it feels like the eighth panel gets across what it wants across better in its posture and positioning than the fourth panel does so. The expressions are, again, stand-out as almost everyone has something unique and interesting conveyed. Fluttershy's dialogue actually hits all the better for how actually sympathetic she's looking to Twilight's frenetic movement (speaking of which, the use of blur, translucence and movement lines in the first panel does a great job conveying Twilight's chaotic, wild and desperate movements). i will say Pinkie and Rarity's expressions feel more stock, which fits Rarity's more controlling, stiff-upper-lip demeanor as a dominating force. Pinkie's could probably stood to still convey some of her own wild abandon and giddiness. So yeah, good show!
Artorius
2021-12-24 04:48:14 +0000 UTCTake as much time as you need if every one is a banger like this one, no pun intended, I’m sure we can all be patient
meepsalot
2021-12-23 22:33:52 +0000 UTCFuck yes, that glorious, fuck-drunk expression on Twilight's face is so good. Man this is godly seeing them all now compared to how they started. Boobs out, touchy-feely, and mounds and mounds of super soft hair.
BioYuGi
2021-12-23 22:11:10 +0000 UTC
