Author introspection

When I first write these chapters, I really am focused on getting the story down. I won't say it's like a fully-fleshed outline, because it's definitely more than that, but there's a lot  going on, and I want to make sure the story doesn't get derailed. (Which is a shockingly easy thing to have happen.)

As a result, sometimes I miss the actual character's reactions (like showing Katri's reaction to Vega's death). Those moments and thoughts that make the character real, not just a cog in the story, are important, but it's easy to lose track of them. We're far enough along to tell you that Kaz was always intended to be somewhat neuro-divergent (specifically ASD) so sometimes the way he reacts is part of that, but other characters, not so much 😅

One of the many reasons I really appreciate your feedback is because that tells me where I can do better, both in future first draft chapters, and in final edits. I really do hope someone will pick up this series when I send it to publishers, though. (I'm going for Aethon as my first 'pick', but I have a list). Not only because I really need help in marketing, but because I think an editor would help me with these gaps, as well, and I can't afford to hire one.

I'm just happy I wrote the story! One way or another, TBK will end up published (fingers crossed it's not self-pub this time, if only so I get a non-AI audiobook) and I'm taking in all your comments on how to make it better!

And speaking of audiobooks, I finally made my little sound booth, so I can start on the Legendary Farmer books. I've been fighting to stay well long enough to be able to record, since sick-voice isn't good for vocal work.

I'm still debating whether I'll try to do TBK myself if I don't get picked up by a publisher, just because Kaz's voice is very different from mine (growly and deep). Would you listen to it if it was read by a woman?