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Shea Territo
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TONI IN THE PIT updates..! cover, illustration, NEW CHARACTER, and script segment

hello very much !

slowly but surely making more progress on the comic script. irl emergencies caused a delay in writing and drawing but thankfully its over now. the script is about 8 pages long and going thru a few revisions thanks to my gf and friends but hopefully will be done and posted soon. when posted i would love to hear any thoughts and critiques! :+)

TONI IN THE PIT updates..! cover, illustration, NEW CHARACTER, and script segment TONI IN THE PIT updates..! cover, illustration, NEW CHARACTER, and script segment TONI IN THE PIT updates..! cover, illustration, NEW CHARACTER, and script segment TONI IN THE PIT updates..! cover, illustration, NEW CHARACTER, and script segment

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i was thinking of just writing 11 years later for the time jump or write their ages or something like that !

shea

Aaa this looks so cool so far!!! And a new character! The hard cut in the script is my favorite kind of opening to a story, I’m so excited for the composition. My only question is how will you indicate the jump in age? Like how would we know he’s 19 specifically or does it matter that much

Emma

cover looks so damn clean

ramblin64


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