INTEMPERANCE VI - Chapter 16, Going to California
Added 2022-07-07 03:42:24 +0000 UTCHere's the latest. Things are starting to move forward at an increasing pace again. I would like everyone to know that my opinion upon first encountering the phenomenon of texting was the same as Jake's in this chapter. I, like Jake, can certainly admit when I am proven wrong about something. Let me know how I'm doing. Hope you like this one.
Comments
Love Caydee. Nearly die laughing everytime she says "Shit Show"
2022-07-14 16:58:38 +0000 UTCI enjoy writing the Caydee dialogue almost as much as I enjoy writing the Matt dialogue.
Al Steiner
2022-07-13 10:51:45 +0000 UTCJake, you slick bastard! That's a brilliant plan, and I applaud your pulling it together, Al. The chapter as a whole was good, but the 'daddy moments' with Caydee were my favorite. You're giving us great stuff Al, and I appreciate it.
Adam Driscoll
2022-07-11 09:11:00 +0000 UTC
