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INTEMPERANCE VI - Chapter 13, Please Allow Me to Introduce Myself

A new character is worked up a bit, one who was introduced offscreen a few books back but now needs to be fleshed out a bit. Let's see where this one leads. As always, please keep the feedback coming. It honestly helps me shape this story.

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I wouldn't do that. If Jake starts to dabble in real estate, it will take place mostly off-page.

Al Steiner

Be distracted by real estate (the story actually, hehehe)

Nicholas

You would expect Celia be more like Teach, than the proper girl and girlfriend of a real estate mind…Let her do her own money and be independent

Nicholas


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