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A question for my patrons. Help a writer out here.

No charge for this post as it is not a chapter. I do have a question for those of you who follow the story closely so hopefully you can save me from either making a continuity error or spending a few hours where I could be writing delving back through earlier chapters in the story only to confirm what I already think is true.

Here is the question: I seem to remember that Celia Valdez has, to this point in the narrative, never actually met any of the members of Brainwash in person. Every time that Jake has been in contact with them in person, either for meetings or recording sessions, Celia has been out on tour. Am I wrong? Was there a face-to-face at some point that I can't recall now?

I'm just starting Chapter 13 where there will be such a face-to-face encounter, but I don't want to label it incorrectly.

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All right. I think we've put this subject to bed now. Thank you for the help, everyone. Now, when I post the next chapter and make mention of how Celia has never actually met Brainwash before, no one is allowed to question that without proof.

Al Steiner

It does remind me how long and complex this story is.

Al Steiner

I see this has been sorted out. I just wanted to add how this question shows the complexity of writing something like this and the work that you put into it. It is much appreciated and the end product is all the more enjoyable for it. Thank You


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