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INTEMPERANCE III - Different Circles

Chapter 21, Red Skies at Night

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Merci beaucoup pour ce dernier chapitre. Cette histoire me passionne et j'attends toujours avec impatience les nouveaux épisodes. Et le livre IV.

Sorry. Things slip by me. I hope you're otherwise enjoying the story.

Al Steiner

Two small editing points. Bottom of page 11. It's took their leave, not made their leave, and, top of page 12 Laura was formerly introduced? I think you meant formally.


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