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INTEMPERANCE III - Different Circles, Chapter 12 - Into the Black


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I do not have a bunch of chapters pre-written that I'm just posting on a schedule. I am writing this as we go along and I post them when they are done and edited. I do have a full-time job that I have to attend as well. On average, it takes me about two weeks to finish each chapter, sometimes more, sometimes less. In this particular instance, I hope to have the next Chapter out before Thursday, as that is when I go back to work six out of seven days. Unless something unforeseen happens, it should be out by then.

Al Steiner

Al, you anywhere near giving us a projection on chapter 13? Thanks in advance.

And I'll keep checking in till you post! Missed you all those years you were absent, very happy to see you back again.

I am working on chapter 13 right this very minute.

Al Steiner

Great read, just waiting for more, thanks for all you do!

Thank you. In Chapter 10 I did, in fact, mean to use "appreciatively" instead of appreciably. In earlier instances, however, it is quite possible I really intended to use "appreciably", as that is a word that means considerable or a significant amount and I do use it frequently. If I really meant to use "appreciatively" in those cases as well, however, I will hopefully catch it during final edit prior to publication on Amazon.

Al Steiner

I have enjoyed all Intemperance novels and continue to like I3. There are very few errors that I have noticed, so I hope you won't be offended when I point out your use of "appreciably" when I think you mean appreciatively. I saw it 3 or 4 times, last in chapter 10. I hope you're appreciably appreciative.


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