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Added 2022-11-04 19:09:42 +0000 UTCLatest wip of the Zootopia comic, a change is coming, hope you'll like it!
Comments
Thanks Secret!
2022-11-05 10:40:47 +0000 UTCThanks a lot for all these corrections!
2022-11-05 10:40:39 +0000 UTCThanks Waddler!
2022-11-05 10:40:23 +0000 UTCCorrection time. "Did I pee myself?", "The diaper seems swollen a bit", "I'm sure we can wait until we get home", "you don't want to risk ", "that patch of grass over there"
2022-11-04 19:49:52 +0000 UTCOh my god, yes! That last panel just HAMMERS the buttons. Some corrections: "pee myself", "wait until we get home", "You don't want to risk". "Will do it" is technically correct, but you don't need to have the "it" unless you want to. Excellent work!
nottheking
2022-11-04 19:37:10 +0000 UTCI am loving this comic!
Bonhomouse
2022-11-04 19:28:38 +0000 UTC
