And another page of the comic, featuring the other heroines, hope you'll enjoy!
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There's more coming for sure!
2020-04-04 16:15:39 +0000 UTC
The drool! Oh gods you need to add that more often!
2020-04-04 03:26:45 +0000 UTC
I thought it was an accessory like the ears, I'll add that in linework!
2020-04-03 20:37:33 +0000 UTC
Oh yes, I didn't noticed this slip, thanks Secret!
2020-04-03 20:36:54 +0000 UTC
Yes! Squirrel girl needs her tail!
2020-04-03 07:31:18 +0000 UTC
Digging the comment, looking forward to more... that said, I hate to be that nerdy guy, but aside from the English notes from other posts; squirrel girl is missing her tail >.> having a giant squirrel tail is one of her powers
2020-04-02 23:25:21 +0000 UTC
I didn't see anyone correct "Aren't you excited?" instead "exited" yet.
2020-04-02 20:42:26 +0000 UTC
Thanks notteking, and yes, i plan to do that for the diapers!
2020-04-02 19:26:30 +0000 UTC
Thanks a lot for the corrections, evilengine!
2020-04-02 19:25:35 +0000 UTC
I think, instead of "That was the first of a long series", it could be "That was the first of many". Just a less awkward way of saying it in English, I know language differences can be troublesome at times. The post above me fixed everything else to my knowledge. I don't know if its planned, but it would be pretty cute if Squirrel Girl and Ms. Marvel's diapers had babyish designs instead of medical ones on them to show how far they've regressed and what awaits our current unfortunate heroine. That pic you did of Squirrel Girl in what I'm presuming is this scenario is one of my all-time favorites! Can't wait to see more!
nottheking
2020-04-02 19:20:15 +0000 UTC
First panel should maybe say "That was the first of a long series" or "This is the first in a long series," either works! The second speech bubble could also be written as "It's only a matter of time before you turn like your friends," or "before you become like your friends." Hope this helps, once again loving your work, Soap ^_^