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[Perpetual Change] Weekly Report #33

Warning ! Don't open and scroll on these posts if you want to keep the surprise for the final Chapter 4 release.    

Today I worked on the morning sequence of Chapter 4 again! There were a looooot of tweaks and corrections to do everywhere, some bustsets modifications, some dialogues rearrangement, etc.

There's also little variations depending if Eclair is at a verge of a new regression tier when she make a bad choice or if the puzzle of the last night made her step a new regression tier.

It's nothing spectacular but it add bits of dialogues here and there and complicate the workflow for me.

The first bad ending ever is finally complete and functional! 

Which means that after the game over, you're redirected to the beginning of the chapter with a bit more maturity. 

A bad ending can also happen later, during the breakfast, but the scene is still to write, it's just a placeholder for now.

I also worked on the shortcuts to begin directly at Chapter 4. Due to some bug from RPGMaker, I have some hard time to get what I want but I'm getting closer!

Finally here's a gift BlackRayal did for the game, which was very generous of him. I ask him the permission to ink and finish the piece. This one is part of the morning scenes.

See you next week for another report, have a good day!

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Comments

If it is "sound" then it would be better to replace the second sound used in that sentence, like so: "A (descriptive) sound that only she can hear mixes with her moans and several other rude noises as her diaper balloons out." The "descriptive" can be cut out or replaced with something like "faint" or "crinkiling" or something along those lines. Whatever you are happy with. :)

The text used in the bottom image from BlackRayal needs some tweaking. I think the first sentence is better without that second comma: "Wracked by cramps, Eclair doubles over in pain and fills the seat of her diaper." ...or... "Wracked by cramps, Eclair doubles over in pain, filling the seat of her diaper." The second sentence is missing a word. "A that only she can hear-" Is it sound or noise or something else?


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