Thought this might be fun! Here's the next 6 pages of Jaro, thumbnails this time. :D I'm having so much fun drawing and planning this.
The script is done for the next 3 chapters which has helped a ton. I usually only write down really barebones stuff (like dialogue), but this time I've gone a bit further. And I feel like this way I have to amend the text immediately if I need to add or change anything, otherwise I'll definitely forget.