Chapter not done. Come back tomorrow.
Added 2018-05-17 21:40:24 +0000 UTCSorry, my brain already in vacation mode, plus the chapter harder to write than expected and I have a dinner thing to get to. Maybe I'll finish by tonight, but tomorrow for sure.
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hopefully I can get it to actual chapters at some point, but we shall see :D
2018-05-18 00:26:32 +0000 UTCHonestly the political machinations of who this concubine could be have me more interested than some of the actual power-ups that have happened so far. Is it Mila, in an effort to diminish her foster father's power by having her daughter a concubine? Is it a lesser member of the royal family, intended to spy and figure out what the hell is going on with the Bek'hai with all of their recent innovation, strength growth and what not? Is it a member of one of the Bek'hai's rival factions in an effort to unify the forces at central in anticipation of the coming storm? So many possibilities.
Aethric
2018-05-17 22:57:42 +0000 UTC
