Haha ...yeah, Lauren is totally hot. Jackie just thinks she knocked over some random kid. Why wouldn't she?
Areg5
2016-09-25 14:21:33 +0000 UTC
Wow! *Eleven* pages!! Woot woot! I got Becky and Jackie mixed up. Again. Sigh. But Jackie didn't recognize Sara either. Lauren is a babe. If "Jon" is going to go mess around with the urchins and you need a volunteer to write in to offer poor Lauren a shoulder to cry on, may I volunteer? Heh. Great segment.
Typewriter17
2016-09-25 13:29:45 +0000 UTC
Glad you like it! Yeah, it opens many possibilities!
Areg5
2016-09-25 12:52:43 +0000 UTC
Wow! What an awesome ending to the story. And it leaves so much room for more stories to follow.