Surrogate Pt 2.
Added 2023-05-19 00:11:50 +0000 UTCMonth 1-2
Coordinator: So it looks like the baby is doing fine and is developing well.
Frey: That's good...
Coordinator: Speaking of development.. it looks like you got what you wanted too! You've gone from a solid B to an... *checks notes* E.
Frey: I guess?
Coordinator: You seem disappointed? That is unusually fast!
Frey: Yeah... i've been taking supplements, I was kind of hoping they would be.. umm a bit bigger by now?
Coordinator: How big do you want them to get! You realize you have about 7 months left to still grow right?!
Comments
Hmmm I might do that in future, at the moment i've got each stage as a few pictures and the text i've storyboarded will be spread thin across them. But will do this for the next ones, or maybe a condensed version across fewer pictures after i've finished this series :) Thanks for the feedback though I need more of this to bring you guys better stuff!
Kak
2023-05-19 01:13:54 +0000 UTCso far seems good part of me thinks maybe trying have edits where have the text on the pictures as well as the blank pictures
Kots
2023-05-19 00:52:38 +0000 UTC
