XaiJu
MauLer
MauLer

patreon


So, hows this script doing then?

Well, if your not in my discord, then you won't be completely up to date with this script but it isn't finished unfortunately. 

Invite for Discord -  https://discord.gg/aNX8J2v 

Also I manage to do a 5 hour stream where myself, Wolf and Rags all gave a crude rip into a video with certain ideas about plot holes that conflict with the very point of my assessments, check that out here if you have a spare 5 hours - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IPkdJP0Ut2Q 

So, since the count from 2 weeks ago at 117K; we are now sitting at a grand total of 143,035 words.

And the notes doc containing the references being lowered from 15K to 6K which is a huge chunk gone. 

I have now split the series into six parts ahead of time with the longest 2 being 3 hours each by the look of things. So I should be done with the script in a week and then I will hound the YouTube guest spots for their audio :D

I have 2 out of 7 right now, those lazy bastards! ;)

Once the redraft is done and I have the audio from the Youtubers, I will slot them in at what I consider to be tonally appropriate moments. And revel at the completed script with each of the 500+ references in their correct positions. 

To clarify, this is going to be three times as long and possibly three times as researched as the assessment of The Last Jedi and I want it to be the greatest series I have ever made. 

I have been so exited to write certain portions because of what I have found and how well I felt I can get the explanations across. Not to mention playing with some of the editing in advance.

So what I hope for is the next update has a big picture of the completed script and a final word count with information on what happens next because obviously I will be recording and editing and rendering but I will also be covering The Predator, Venom and Aqua-man as they release this year.  

So the critique will be delayed if I bump into any of those films, most likely The Predator will be the only one but then I will be posting editing updates on here, which are much more exiting than script updates and hopefully, within 2 months;

You guys will have 15 hours of content, cleaned up and redrafted to my very best ability. 

I am going to get back to the script now, I am on the summary of the summary and talk about some relevant meta information. 

Before writing up the exit outro's and stuff, so that's how close I am to completion :) Thanks again for your patience folks, we're almost there!


Comments

I usually cannot stand to watch livestreams; usually they have lots of long pauses and rambling, and in long-form content I can't be bothered to watch it. So I'm looking forward to your next scripted piece. However, I've decided to give your most recent one a try - it's a lot better on 1.25x speed.

John P

That's a fair concern, the length wasn't a goal. It was a result of talking about what I wanted to cover and proving points as best I could. It ended up this way in same vein as my ds 2 series, which turned one hour into ten. I can't guarantee that you will like it but it's the best thing I have made on YouTube so far from my perspective, once it's complete of course :)

MauLer

I will admit I am a little bit skeptical about this critique. While I am looking forward to it, I hope it isn't going to be an overambitious project that ends up saying little in so many hours. Either way, I have much faith in you MauLer and I can't wait to listen to the videos during work :)

Michal Nowacki

That 5 hour stream kept me company through the last hour of my work day, my commute, the gym and some Dark Souls 3 adventuring (I recently completed DS2, framing my experience through MauLer Response Theory- it was an okay time, but I agree with the vast majority of your arguments). That stream was honestly great. I’d love to see more “shoot the shit and respond to a daft youtuber” steams with Wolf, Rags and yourself.

Marc Boggio


More Creators